hi, nice to meet you all [=

[asian-fanatic]

HI HI ^^

My name is Ama~ I'm Chinese... I'm really young.... and I enjoy writing fiction ... lol, yep. I hope to improve my writing and increase my miserably puny vocabulary ;_;

Ah, and let's see.... recently, I've been told by my English teacher that quite frankly, my writing skills need serious work... which is really depressing me. (Since I've always been told that was my specialty) =_=v


I'm going to post up a submission I have ready on here soon ^^;; Looking forward to critique :mellow:

[GeorgeMichael]

Yay, a newcomer :)


Welcome to the Site, I hope you have fun here and that people are nice to you (which they will be :) everyone is nice around here. )

And to epect critiques remember you have to give critiques as well ok? :)


If you have any questions about anything just PM me :)

[Alex]

welcome to the sight

post and critique, have fun, and I'm sure you will.

Andy and Shaun will get over here soon and tell you all the important stuff like "pm me if you need help" =]]

[Shaun]

Welcome to the site. Go ahead and give a look-around and give some crits and then post your work. Do your best to edit it and then we'll help you the next step. I would recommend you hunt down Strunk & White's Elements of Style. It should be easy to find online on Amazon or in a used book store. It's small and shouldn't cost you more than a couple dollars and it will help you loads on grammar and punctuation!

[asian-fanatic]

^___^; yes, i shall check that Strunk & White's Elements Style.
Ah, I will do my best to critique for sure. I've just looked at some tips here... and do I ever agree with them! Very interesting~ I like it here already, thanks guys!

[angela]

welcome, welcome !

:D

Hope you find it fun here, I know I do !

[Ichigo]

Welcome to the site! I'm Alley and if you have any questions you can ask.:P

[Rafael Domination]

Don't let your teacher get you down. Remember, you're young, and you have a long way to go. If you start now, and have the determination, you can grow up into a notable writer and rub it in that geezer's face...^^

Erm...the cheese-talk aside...

Welcome to the site! :D

*try not to use 'lol' too much*

[Zombified]

Welcome to the site!

I hope you have fun here, and I hope you stick around.
We could always use more members.

You need anything, don't hesitate to ask.
I won't bite...unless you want me to. :D

[Rafael Domination]

//Can I get the second bite, Zomb? :D//

*I'm hungry*

[Imelda]

Teachers are idiots.

Hi.

[Carraka]

I'm Asian too! Sorta.

But hey -- I'm Car, and I get Bs on my essays. I conclude then my writing is not good enough for my English teacher. On the other hand, expository writing is not creative writing, so I try not to worry too much.

[Rafael Domination]

I wanna eat your teacher. Can I?

[ScottyMcGee]

WELCOME NOOB NEWCOMER!

IT IS I: THE GREAT SCOTTY MCGEE!

I SHALL DEVOUR YOUR SOUL HOPE YOU HAVE A PLEASANT STAY HERE ON PLANET YWO!!


Yeah...

;)

[Rafael Domination]

And I thought I was slightly arcane :P

Glad you could join me on the 'strange' side, Scotty :D

[ScottyMcGee]

I never joined. I CREATED.

I always scare noobs I mean newcomers.

[Zaphkiel]

It's nice to meet you. I'm Zaphkiel, and welcome to the site.:cool: If you ever need advice on essays or papers, just ask me, I'm great at school stuff like that.

If you ever need anything, just shoot me a PM.

[Nyx]

Hey, I'm Nyx (obviously). Welcome to YWO. Of course you can PM if you have any questions and I look forward to reading your writing:D

P.S. Are you a fan of the LLAMA?:llama:

[Rafael Domination]

Whatever you do! SAY NOOOOO!

Jaguars are better, right? ^^

[Nyx]

Don't listen to Raff...he's an evil-llama eater. I mean look at the llama:llama:, how could anyone not like something so cute? Besides, they're holy llamas, with holy spit that will melt the non-believers *cough* Jordan, Riff-raff *cough*

[Rafael Domination]

Lies!

[Alex]

what about ninjas and pirates?

[Nyx]

Llamas are much more important, Alex!:P

But since you brought it up, yes, choose between:

:pirate: > :ninja:

[Andy]

We should bring up squirrels and Zelda while we're at it! :link:

[asian-fanatic]

ah. hehehe~ thanks guys ^^;
reading the comments were amusing, although I don't know what's going on with the "zelda" and "squirrels."

Why not use "lol"? Just wondering.

[Rafael Domination]

Oh don't worry :P

There's more to come...