Besoin d'une critique? Oui, oui.

[Rose]

My French is rusty - hmph.

Anyway, if you need a purpley shnurpley critique, then just post here. Post the title of your submission, in addition to the link.

I can do short stories, poems, and/or novel chapters.

I'll try to get to them as soon as possible.

P.S. If I already gave away some crit tickets already but still didn't get to the submissions yet, then please, do post here to remind me, again, in addition to the link.

Note: I finish school on June 23rd, and I iz free all summer... I think...

kthnxttyllyksrsly.

MAJOREDIT: No more school, folks. Got some free time for you YWO members seeking critiques. :3

So, post away!

[Peppermental]

rossseeee is fabulous true story.

[Julian]

Don't crit this crap after all.

[lostbookworm]

Message me for critiques as well, though I only do poetry and/or experimental pieces.

Hi-jacker much :P

[Peppermental]

We're both part of the team sparkle motion. butttttt fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine I'll make my own thread.

[Rose]

We're both part of the team sparkle motion. butttttt fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine I'll make my own thread.

I'm part of the team sparkle motion? Ohboyohboyohboyohboyyyyyyy. Wooooooot

/spam.

EDIT: love you Caleb. And love your sparklenessness which... you... sprinkled... all over mah thread. :P

/NOWENDSPAM.

[Arty]

Caleb/Rose/whoever is interested, I'd be really grateful if you could take a quick glance at this:
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=6939
je vous aime <33

[lalodragon]

Please crit Tsunami (tanka) (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=7023). I want it finalized in three days and I'm lacking.
thank you sweetheart! :love:

[Rose]

I started critiquing it actually. It's saved somewhere in my documents. I'll go dig it out and continue critiquing it. Though, I can't promise that the crit will be done tonight.

[lalodragon]

I started critiquing it actually. It's saved somewhere in my documents. I'll go dig it out and continue critiquing it. Though, I can't promise that the crit will be done tonight.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! :D
Don't worry if you don't get it done tonight. :hug:
Thanks.

[Clarissa]

Dammit, Rose, I need you to come back and CRITIQUE ME HARRRRD.

Come back to me?

If you do come back, I'll love you forever...

Yeah, so take a look at 'Bertha' if you do come back because you're so cool.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=7100

[Rose]

Dammit, Rose, I need you to come back and CRITIQUE ME HARRRRD.

Come back to me?

If you do come back, I'll love you forever...

Yeah, so take a look at 'Bertha' if you do come back because you're so cool.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=7100

*puts on a pair of shades and nods in a cool way*

I just "left" for a while, but that doesn't mean that I ain't gonna be critiquing. Well, either during my "vacation" or when I come back. I can't stay away from my lovelyz for too long. I'll be back in 2 weeks, bit more, bit less. <3

EDIT: copied your poem to Microsoft Word. Gonna be working on your crit, dahlin'.

[Clarissa]

May have forgotten a teeny, tiny insignificant little detail. I kinda need the crit by the 30th... O.o

If you can't do it by then, no worries.

[Rose]

I'll try. <33333333

[Clarissa]

<3333333333333333333333333333

[Julian]

Ok Rose, my compatible, as I said in chat:

The Girl and the Monster
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=7103

Part 1 is worldbuilding

Part 2 is village introduction

Part 3 introduces some characters

Dookey, the book-loving boy.
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=7114

Technically this is a short story, but I think that the prose and style is too simple for it to fit in the short story section, as the story is about a kid for kids. The only thing missing are a bunch of images!
The magic of copy-paste <3.

[Rose]

Okay people. I'm back, and I'm ready to give you critiques.

As it's obvious, if you'd like me to purple-ize your submissions, just post here. :3