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dragonheart
11-01-2010, 12:33 AM
So the Gems of Virtue are sort of awards you give to your characters. To make a good story try to make a team of characters that through out the group have about six of the seven Gems so that they are varied.


The Dimond of Purity
The Amthist of Love
The Ruby of Courage
The Emrald of kindness
The Opal of Hopefulness
The Sapphire of Inteligence

ManyIdeas
11-02-2010, 09:57 PM
First note, spelling error! Its amethyst, not amethist!
Hmmm, I see the idea you are trying to put across, but it sounds really cliche. In many group travel fictions I've read, they've always had those kind of people. The types of characters aren't new, you used to see them a lot of the time (until Twilight came in and 'emotionally-void' became the new trend). You tend to see the a lot in animes, too.
For example, in the old Trigun, the protagonist Vash was the 2nd down to 4th, Meryl would have been amethyst and opal, and Mille would have been saphire. There isn't much varried choices either, to be honest it isn't varried at all.
What makes something varried is the difference between characters. One of those gems would probably also count as five more, due to the traits that come from being kind (love, purity, hope etc). What would make diversity would if you include the following (laid out in gem form):

Jet of Secrecy
Topaz of Energy (hyper)
Agate of Manipulation
Helidor of Ponse (Royal/ Posh)
Onyx of Selfishness
Cat's Eye of Sly

To name a few. You need balance; black, white and gray. Your examples are the fairy-tale cliche many grown readers are feed up to see, unless they are written in a good way. Sometimes a good group doesn't have to be... good! They can be made up of many misunderstood 'tropes', such as secrecy and sly.
TV Tropes is an excellent resource on finding different types of characters, its funny and has loads of options. Look through and see what other oprtions there are:
Tropes of fictional characters (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Characters)

dragonheart
11-03-2010, 01:32 AM
[COLOR="Red"]First note, spelling error! Its amethyst, not amethist!
Jet of Secrecy
Topaz of Energy (hyper)
Agate of Manipulation
Helidor of Ponse (Royal/ Posh)
Onyx of Selfishness
Cat's Eye of Sly


Thanks. Um, what's a agate and helidor? And isn't it a tiger eye? Anyway it's more of a game than anything else, I just didn't know where to put it. Do you know a better place for the next one?

Clawfire
11-03-2010, 06:06 AM
The Tiger's eye of Determination
The Jasper of Long Life
The Lapis Lazuli of Healing
The Amber of Protection
The Beryl of Softness
The Jade of Rest