Hi!

[pockylove]

hello YWO! As you can see, I'm new here and the reason i joined is because I would like to be critique on my short stories. My english marks at school aren't very good so i want to write stories to fix my grammer mistakes! It's nice to meet you all!:D

[Clarissa]

Hai there :P

Short stories, eh? What genre of short stories?

And no problem about the grammar mistakes. A lot of us would sell our souls to critique the grammar stuff... So if you need a critique lemme know, okay?

Other than that, what music do you like?
What do you like to read?
Socks or no socks?

Also, follow the rules and regulations (like caps on the right letters etc)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php <---- Critique guidelines

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php <--- Site rules.

Okay then. Bai for now :) Let me know if you need anything else.

[Rose]

Hai there :P

Short stories, eh? What genre of short stories?

And no problem about the grammar mistakes. A lot of us would sell our souls to critique the grammar stuff... So if you need a critique lemme know, okay?

Other than that, what music do you like?
What do you like to read?
Socks or no socks?

Also, follow the rules and regulations (like caps on the right letters etc)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php <---- Critique guidelines

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php <--- Site rules.

Okay then. Bai for now :) Let me know if you need anything else.

I'm guessing it's Post in the Newbie Zone Before Rose Day, eh Clar? :P

Anyway, welcome to the site, PL. We have a member called Pockyfreak here. I think you're gonna like each other. :P

If you need anything, feel free to ask me at anytime. info.Rose@youngwritersonline.net (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/member.php?u=1612) (Yup, my profile. xD) I think I should have this link in my signature. :unsure: Oh well...

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Fuschia or violet?

Sandals or converse?

Hope you enjoy your stay here. ^^

Good luck hating Twilight.

\/ Peace... and... I'm out.

[Alice Glitterhorn]

Wazzup, mah homie-g! Youza gonna lyke it here.

*is shot*

Welcome. ^^

[Majyk]

I'm guessing it's Post in the Newbie Zone Before Rose Day, eh Clar? :P

You're forgetting that before you did it, that was my job.

Anyway, welcome to YWO. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. ^^ Aaaaaand... that's all I have to say.

[Anira]

Hi and welcome to YWO. I look forward to reading some of your stuff.

[pockylove]

thank you! i think i'll like it here very much :)

oh and i write short stories based on how i feel and when and ideal pops in my head. so i'm not very sure...

[ManyIdeas]

Nice to meet you XD If you need any critiquing, just PM and I'll see what I can do :D