Women, ASSEMMBBLLEEE

[Rage]

Alright, got a subjective question for all those who are arsed answering it. It's subjective in the sense that every girl is an individual, and will react differently accordingly.

Here's the scenario:

You're about 19 years old, you have a part time job. The job can be anything you imagine it to be, you've just started this job, been there for about four weeks. It's everything that a job should be, except there's a weird boy who acts either annoyed, angry or even disgusted whenever you look at him. For arguements sake, you're attracted to him, visualize someone who you'd find extremely attractive.
He doesn't speak much, doesn't smile much, acts rather weird.

Okay, he's never spoken to you, never smiled and doesn't keep eye contact whenever you've met eyes during work. One day you finish your shift, and are making your way home, you exit your work and begin to walk home. Let's say you turn a corner from the place where you work at, and walk down some kind of alley way or typical suburban shortcut, and you hear a skidding footstep behind you. You turn around and see the weird boy from your work, and he then calls your name.

In your own little world, what would happen next?

Just doing some research to see how actual real people would imagine things in stead of every character just being me. :sarcasm:

[Bowie20049]

He will soon save me from an uncontrolled truck and then reveal he is a vampire.

[Rage]

He will soon save me from an uncontrolled truck and then reveal he is a vampire.

Bowie, you have a penis. You're not allowed to answer. Unless... :sarcasm:

[Rose]

Okay, so there are two options:

- reveal his true feelings. (a.k.a love~ yes, I know, cliche'.)

- Exclaim about the weird looks during woking hours maybe...?

Oh... I just thought of something else...

Maybe this alley is a shortcut to his house and he thought I was spying on him or something. :P

You know, I'm trying to be as cliche' as possible. xD

That's life, man. It's all about cliche's.

[Eilidh]

Tell me I left my purse at work or whatever, and then I'd question him about the weird looks and he'd give some answer and then we'd be cool.

[Schooner]

I think I'd ignore him. This guy sounds like a jerk.

[Rose]

I think I'd ignore him. This guy sounds like a jerk.

Schoony Woony, don't forget that you're attracted to him. :3

[Alice Glitterhorn]

I would probably get really worked up about it and stutter some greeting before running away (or, rather, making some excuse to leave). I'm not one for conflicts. :P

[Rage]

Would any of you be willing to write down some of the questions or body language you'd display?

Actually, it would be pretty helpful if anyone has enough time, and is super bored, could write a little imaginative conversation between you and this imaginary boy. I wanna know how you girls would imagine him to respond, and then how you'd respond to the responses you've given him.
I suppose, what I need to is to see the thought processes of how you girls think in situations to better my understanding of how I should write female characters. Cause I already know what I'd do, and pretty much every girl I try write ends up being me with boobs... :sarcasm:

xDDDD

[Bowie20049]

Well girls aren't too different from us :\ I just write from what I think they'll do, but try to get myself away from their personalities. I think it works since I'm nothing like my girls

[Iridescence]

Hmm. Okay. I sort of see what you're trying to find out. I'll try the little imaginary scenario thing, starting with the point at which this Guy calls my name.

Guy: "Aly!" (That being my name.)
Me: (uncertain pause; half-turn): Oh...hi. (awkward laugh, followed by adjusting of coat collar or running of hand through hair) I didn't think you knew my name.
Guy: (returns awkward laugh with maximized awkwardness) Yeah, sorry about that. *scratches head* I've been having a sort of rough time this month. Sorry if I made you think I was a jerk or something.
Me: (joking dryly to relieve tension): You? A jerk? Nah...(smile) Um, so what's with the weird looks, anyway? Did I...do something to offend you?
Guy: (hurriedly) No, no, I just have [insert generic problem here]. So that's why I've been playing the douche since you got the job.
Me: (allowing Guy to fall in step beside me and nodding empathetically): Oh, okay, I see. Well, if you feel like talking...when do you have lunch break?
Guy: (shy grin): Same time as you. And sure. Thanks.

So...yeah. There was my (awkward) attempt at creating an (awkward) conversation. When I'm uncomfortable I tend to make sarcastic comments that people may or may not interpret as friendly. Either that or I do an AliceGriffin and make some excuse to leave/stutter my way out. :P If this Guy is attractive, though, and has a legitimate reason for acting the way he does, I'd try to ease some kind of explanation out of him without being combative. Dunno if this helps at all, but there's my reaction.

[Little Demon]

Why is it most guys think woman are like some kind of alien :/. Also, if I found I was being followed by some attractive guy I would probably yell at him, in less he had a good reason for stalking me.

[Bowie20049]

What happens if his house is on the way to mine? If I yell at him, he might misunderstand and think I'm weird. Oh god, he called my name! What to do what to do? Keep walking! No, don't stop! Great, now I have to turn around...

From the mind of the shy and secluded. :P

[Clarissa]

Knowing me, I'd pretend not to notice him, but go bright red. If he started a conversation or something, I'd stammer something ridiculous out, swallowing in all the wrong places and promptly trip over a stray cat or some other bizarre object lying in my path. I'm not much of a talker really...

In an ideal world, I'd say something super cool, witty and clever, which would lead to a conversation, which would, in turn, lead to his place or mine... ;)

[Majyk]

I'd probably be suspicious of him following and calling my name. Then I'd probably say something like "Oh, hey" and wait for him to explain why he's suddenly decided to talk to me.


Why is it most guys think woman are like some kind of alien :/.

I was kind of wondering about that, too.

[Iridescence]

What happens if his house is on the way to mine? If I yell at him, he might misunderstand and think I'm weird. Oh god, he called my name! What to do what to do? Keep walking! No, don't stop! Great, now I have to turn around...

From the mind of the shy and secluded. :P

O_o Geez. It's creepy how accurate you are.

[Alice Glitterhorn]

O_o Geez. It's creepy how accurate you are.

That's what I was thinking, too, Iri. It's funny how that would be my exact thoughts.

Anyway, the sort of "I'm really attracted to him but he seems to hate me" is something that's happened to me before. I didn't remember that earlier. :P Anyway, if he called my name in an alley I (I'm changing my thoughts) would just ignore him and get over the fact he's cute.

Cause he's probably just a douche.

That's my anti-male brain thinking, though.

[Schooner]

I have a feeling that if he were persistant and insisted walking with me, I would talk to him. But there would be a lot of awkward silences and most of the time I would be thinking, "God he must think I'm so boring."

Oh, and the entire time my face would be a big red cherry tomato :D

(my heart might also be racing for some ridiculous reason)

[Bowie20049]

I keep forgetting you're female

[Iridescence]

I have a feeling that if he were persistant and insisted walking with me, I would talk to him. But there would be a lot of awkward silences and most of the time I would be thinking, "God he must think I'm so boring."

Oh, and the entire time my face would be a big red cherry tomato :D

(my heart might also be racing for some ridiculous reason)

O_o Geez. It's creepy how accurate you are.

[Bowie20049]

O_o Geez. It's creepy how accurate you are.

Goes to show how girls don't think too much differently than guys do.

[Rage]

Okay, so it’s fairly established that most of you would be nervous, slightly shy due to the fact that you have no idea why this attractive person is speaking to you all of a sudden. Got a new question to follow now.

Just like to point out that there is no supernatural anything in this, just some guy xD.

So you’re nervous, probably intrigued due to the fact that you find him attractive, and you’re probably contemplating different ideas to why he would be doing this out of the blue. You’re stood there let’s say, 15 paces away from each other, he’s called your name and you haven’t replied.

A. He walks towards you, and without hesitation or warning grabs one of your hands, and pulls you into a walking pace besides him. He hasn’t looked you in the face yet, you’re now walking with him down the street/alley way hand in hand, what would happen next in your world?

B. He walks towards you, and places one hand on a nearby wall so he’s leaning to one side. He looks at you bemused, and moves his face close to yours. His expression is almost monotone, what would happen next in your world?

Even those who claimed they would simply ignore him, if he abruptly did one of these two, what would you do?

[Alice Glitterhorn]

Okay, so it’s fairly established that most of you would be nervous, slightly shy due to the fact that you have no idea why this attractive person is speaking to you all of a sudden. Got a new question to follow now.

Just like to point out that there is no supernatural anything in this, just some guy xD.

So you’re nervous, probably intrigued due to the fact that you find him attractive, and you’re probably contemplating different ideas to why he would be doing this out of the blue. You’re stood there let’s say, 15 paces away from each other, he’s called your name and you haven’t replied.

A. He walks towards you, and without hesitation or warning grabs one of your hands, and pulls you into a walking pace besides him. He hasn’t looked you in the face yet, you’re now walking with him down the street/alley way hand in hand, what would happen next in your world?

B. He walks towards you, and places one hand on a nearby wall so he’s leaning to one side. He looks at you bemused, and moves his face close to yours. His expression is almost monotone, what would happen next in your world?

Even those who claimed they would simply ignore him, if he abruptly did one of these two, what would you do?

A. I would probably ask him what he was doing and/or take my hand back. He's starting to sound a little crazy, you do realize that, right? :P What I would be thinking is the same thing as in the next paragraph.

B. In a perfect world he would apologize, smile, and we'd live happily ever after. But more likely it would be that I would just walk away, face burning. And I would be thinking that he's just making fun of me somehow, hoping I'd fall for him so he can knock me down and spread it around that I was all over him (this is at work, right?).

[Schooner]

A. I would probably run down the alley screaming "RAPIST!!!" with my arms flailing. Kidding.
I think I would probably ask him what's up then let him take me where he wanted to go because one, I would be curious about why he was talking to me and two, I would like that he was holding my hand.

B. I think I would turn my face away, embarrassed. I wouldn't expect a kiss or anything but I don't think I would leave. I also think I might expect him to be mean to me or something because, so far, his attitude towards me has not suggested otherwise.

[Rage]

He's starting to sound a little crazy, you do realize that, right? :P

LOL. Aww, what I want is for the guy to be all deep and romanticizing, but because I'm completely empty in that department, I'm having a difficult time figuring out what would appeal to readers.

[Alice Glitterhorn]

LOL. Aww, what I want is for the guy to be all deep and romanticizing, but because I'm completely empty in that department, I'm having a difficult time figuring out what would appeal to readers.

Deep and romantic would, to me at least, make me think of a guy who's really quiet, but gradually opens up about himself as you try to be friends with him. Someone who seems like a loner, but has awesome manners and whatnot.

God, that sounds cliche. Oh well.

[Rage]

I don't think love can't be anything but cliched. Rofl, that's why I can never just say to someone, "I love you". I would just feel so silly, all like aahh luurrvv you man lololol pink hearts appear around my head and a baby shoots me in the face with an arrow.

o_o

[Alice Glitterhorn]

I don't think love can't be anything but cliched. Rofl, that's why I can never just say to someone, "I love you". I would just feel so silly, all like aahh luurrvv you man lololol pink hearts appear around my head and a baby shoots me in the face with an arrow.

o_o

Hehe, that's what I was thinking. :P

[Kiba]

Here's the scenario:

You're about 19 years old, you have a part time job. The job can be anything you imagine it to be, you've just started this job, been there for about four weeks. It's everything that a job should be, except there's a weird boy who acts either annoyed, angry or even disgusted whenever you look at him. For argument's sake, you're attracted to him, visualize someone who you'd find extremely attractive.

He doesn't speak much, doesn't smile much, acts rather weird.

Okay, he's never spoken to you, never smiled and doesn't keep eye contact whenever you've met eyes during work. One day you finish your shift, and are making your way home, you exit your work and begin to walk home. Let's say you turn a corner from the place where you work at, and walk down some kind of alley way or typical suburban shortcut, and you hear a skidding footstep behind you. You turn around and see the weird boy from your work, and he then calls your name.

In your own little world, what would happen next?

-
Me: (uncertain, but polite) What?

Guy: (takes a breath) I've... been kind of a dick for the past month, haven't I?

Me: (forces herself to not cuss him out, manages to keep any sign of anger from showing aside from a twitch and a growing stomach-ache) ...Yes. Yes, you have.

Guy: So... Sorry.

Me: ...Thanks?

-
Next part:
A. He walks towards you, and without hesitation or warning grabs one of your hands, and pulls you into a walking pace besides him. He hasn’t looked you in the face yet, you’re now walking with him down the street/alley way hand in hand, what would happen next in your world?

I would be uncertain, but I'd go along with it as long as he doesn't pull out a weapon or something.

B. He walks towards you, and places one hand on a nearby wall so he’s leaning to one side. He looks at you bemused, and moves his face close to yours. His expression is almost monotone, what would happen next in your world?

Me: HOLY FUCK GET AWAY! (punches him in the solar plexus, or maybe a bit lower)

Guy: (collapses with a strangled noise of pain)

Me: Oh god, I'm sorry! I hate dark places and I hate people getting in my space so I just... You're okay, right? (helps him up)

Guy: That's okay, I should have asked first. (takes a few breaths, stands back up) God, you are ridiculous. I feel like I got hit with a sledgehammer!

Me: Well, Shaolin Kung Fu tends to do that. (fidgets awkwardly) You okay?

Guy: I've been better. So--I never do that again if I want to have kids.

Me: ...It won't help with STDs, though.

Guy: (struggles not to laugh) That's a horrible thing to joke about!

Me: I know, I couldn't resist. Should I wait before making more jokes?

Guy: (nods) And we should probably leave before someone thinks I'm mugging you or... something.

Me: Good point.

[We leave. I discover that he is just as geeky/artsy as I am, and we have a lot of awesome geeky-couple moments that are several times more original than a romantic-comedy or teen-romance flick. Scene.]

[Rage]

-
Me: (uncertain, but polite) What?

Guy: (takes a breath) I've... been kind of a dick for the past month, haven't I?

Me: (forces herself to not cuss him out, manages to keep any sign of anger from showing aside from a twitch and a growing stomach-ache) ...Yes. Yes, you have.

Guy: So... Sorry.

Me: ...Thanks?

-


I would be uncertain, but I'd go along with it as long as he doesn't pull out a weapon or something.



Me: HOLY FUCK GET AWAY! (punches him in the solar plexus, or maybe a bit lower)

Guy: (collapses with a strangled noise of pain)

Me: Oh god, I'm sorry! I hate dark places and I hate people getting in my space so I just... You're okay, right? (helps him up)

Guy: That's okay, I should have asked first. (takes a few breaths, stands back up) God, you are ridiculous. I feel like I got hit with a sledgehammer!

Me: Well, Shaolin Kung Fu tends to do that. (fidgets awkwardly) You okay?

Guy: I've been better. So--I never do that again if I want to have kids.

Me: ...It won't help with STDs, though.

Guy: (struggles not to laugh) That's a horrible thing to joke about!

Me: I know, I couldn't resist. Should I wait before making more jokes?

Guy: (nods) And we should probably leave before someone thinks I'm mugging you or... something.

Me: Good point.

[We leave. I discover that he is just as geeky/artsy as I am, and we have a lot of awesome geeky-couple moments that are several times more original than a romantic-comedy or teen-romance flick. Scene.]

Ah, that was rather refreshing. :sarcasm: I never thought of adding a personality trait as extreme as kung fu. I suppose that would be interesting for the this, oh so mysterious boy to be taken down so easily by a girl. It would add a depth of vulnerability to himself. Maybe a lot of people would be able to relate to that feeling as well, I know I would. :sarcasm: Thanks Kiba.

It seems the radical behavior on the second part of the question doesn't go down too well, I might as well drop that. I guess it would be a little psycho if someone actually did grab your hand and begin walking. Damn, romance writing is fucking difficult.

[Iridescence]

It seems the radical behavior on the second part of the question doesn't go down too well, I might as well drop that. I guess it would be a little psycho if someone actually did grab your hand and begin walking. Damn, romance writing is fucking difficult.

It's not that the radical behavior doesn't go down well -- it's just the unbelievability of the scenario. It may be closed-minded, but I doubt that any guy would have the guts (or whatever other explanation guys have for doing what they do) to grab a girl's hand. I'm honestly not sure how I'd react, simply because I wouldn't expect such a thing to happen outside a cheesy romance novel or something. That's why you get responses ranging from embarrassment to what-the-fuck to a big can of whoop-ass.

Maybe it would help if you would describe the character you're trying to make all deep and romantic, because there's no true canon for how a guy reveals his affection (there're cliches, but that's different). It really depends on his personality, I think.

That is, if this thing is still going on. If not, forget I said anything. -_-;

[Rage]

Is it really that unbelievable? I’d of assumed something like that would of happened before, maybe grabbed was the wrong word, but more of a simple taking of the hand, and leading them to walk by the side of you.

The guy is, I suppose painfully awkward. In the sense that he’s so bothered about the other persons perception of himself, that it causes him to feel stress and anxiety, which then leads to him being nervous ect. Everyone knows how horrible it is, talking to a horribly nervous person.
Now with all that intact, he feels like he causes people to feel uncomfortable just because of his own insecurities, he doesn’t socially interact much so he isn’t causing people grief. He doesn’t smile out of common courtesy because he’d assume everyone would think he’s either mocking them or being condescending. But he’s finally had enough, and wants to break his self applied rules and see if he can talk to this girl he finds highly attractive.

[Alice Glitterhorn]

Is it really that unbelievable? I’d of assumed something like that would of happened before, maybe grabbed was the wrong word, but more of a simple taking of the hand, and leading them to walk by the side of you.

The guy is, I suppose painfully awkward. In the sense that he’s so bothered about the other persons perception of himself, that it causes him to feel stress and anxiety, which then leads to him being nervous ect. Everyone knows how horrible it is, talking to a horribly nervous person.
Now with all that intact, he feels like he causes people to feel uncomfortable just because of his own insecurities, he doesn’t socially interact much so he isn’t causing people grief. He doesn’t smile out of common courtesy because he’d assume everyone would think he’s either mocking them or being condescending. But he’s finally had enough, and wants to break his self applied rules and see if he can talk to this girl he finds highly attractive.

That makes much more sense, actually :P You should have told us this earlier.

Although I'd still find the hand-grabbing a little weird. I'd expect him to talk to the girl first, rather than be all touchy-feely. :sarcasm:

[Schooner]

That guy kinda sounds like me...'cept for the hand-grabbing. I'd never be that gutsy.

[Rage]

Lol that would of ruined the point of the question Alice, in the sense that if this was a real life situation, you wouldn't of known his thought process.

I wanted his actions to be quite flamboyant, due to the frustration of being alone. It's like, a personal barrier that he cannot break. Or can he? :sarcasm:

[Anira]

Okay, so it’s fairly established that most of you would be nervous, slightly shy due to the fact that you have no idea why this attractive person is speaking to you all of a sudden. Got a new question to follow now.

Just like to point out that there is no supernatural anything in this, just some guy xD.

So you’re nervous, probably intrigued due to the fact that you find him attractive, and you’re probably contemplating different ideas to why he would be doing this out of the blue. You’re stood there let’s say, 15 paces away from each other, he’s called your name and you haven’t replied.

A. He walks towards you, and without hesitation or warning grabs one of your hands, and pulls you into a walking pace besides him. He hasn’t looked you in the face yet, you’re now walking with him down the street/alley way hand in hand, what would happen next in your world?

B. He walks towards you, and places one hand on a nearby wall so he’s leaning to one side. He looks at you bemused, and moves his face close to yours. His expression is almost monotone, what would happen next in your world?

Even those who claimed they would simply ignore him, if he abruptly did one of these two, what would you do?

A. Either I would be slightly weirded out that said guy has no social skills... at all. And just takes a girl's hand to show some sort of affection or I would think that someone else is following me/us and he's trying to pretend that we are walking together to throw someone off. Either way I would probably ask him why he took my hand, though I wouldn't stop walking with him nor would I look at him.

B. Me: What?
Guy: You always have a harsh look on your face.
Me: And you don't?
Guy: You're very interesting. You know that, right?
Me: Right.
I would then walk away.

[Kiba]

Ah, that was rather refreshing. :sarcasm: I never thought of adding a personality trait as extreme as kung fu. I suppose that would be interesting for the this, oh so mysterious boy to be taken down so easily by a girl. It would add a depth of vulnerability to himself. Maybe a lot of people would be able to relate to that feeling as well, I know I would. :sarcasm: Thanks Kiba.

It seems the radical behavior on the second part of the question doesn't go down too well, I might as well drop that. I guess it would be a little psycho if someone actually did grab your hand and begin walking. Damn, romance writing is fucking difficult.

I can tolerate someone taking my hand and leading me somewhere, but getting up in my space and pinning me against a wall is completely different. Hell, I get agitated even if I'm in a crowded place and I KNOW people have no choice but to cram themselves next to me. Maybe it's because I'm about 5'1" on a good day, but I HATE HATE HATE people getting too close without my permission.

I didn't mean to sound OMG KICKASS if that's what it sounded like. People with my mindset are generally more high-strung and easily agitated as opposed to "KILL THE BASTARD WHO WON'T TAKE ME SERIOUSLY."

[Rage]

I never said he pinned her to a wall, infact I never stated he touched her at all. He merely leant on a wall, and moved his face closer to hers.
Seems you interpreted that yourself, out of this fear that you have. :sarcasm:

[snow_yuki]

Alright, got a subjective question for all those who are arsed answering it. It's subjective in the sense that every girl is an individual, and will react differently accordingly.

Here's the scenario:

You're about 19 years old, you have a part time job. The job can be anything you imagine it to be, you've just started this job, been there for about four weeks. It's everything that a job should be, except there's a weird boy who acts either annoyed, angry or even disgusted whenever you look at him. For arguements sake, you're attracted to him, visualize someone who you'd find extremely attractive.
He doesn't speak much, doesn't smile much, acts rather weird.

Okay, he's never spoken to you, never smiled and doesn't keep eye contact whenever you've met eyes during work. One day you finish your shift, and are making your way home, you exit your work and begin to walk home. Let's say you turn a corner from the place where you work at, and walk down some kind of alley way or typical suburban shortcut, and you hear a skidding footstep behind you. You turn around and see the weird boy from your work, and he then calls your name.

In your own little world, what would happen next?

Just doing some research to see how actual real people would imagine things in stead of every character just being me. :sarcasm:

He'll apologize, like, proudly. I mean, he's quite too proud to admit he's sorry. Well, well, he'll apologize for his ignorance. Then there'll be introductions. But the next day, he acts as though you haven't talked to him the other day.

[Rage]

He'll apologize, like, proudly. I mean, he's quite too proud to admit he's sorry. Well, well, he'll apologize for his ignorance. Then there'll be introductions. But the next day, he acts as though you haven't talked to him the other day.

What makes you say you'd think this person would act as though nothing happened?

[Kiba]

I never said he pinned her to a wall, infact I never stated he touched her at all. He merely leant on a wall, and moved his face closer to hers.
Seems you interpreted that yourself, out of this fear that you have.

Huh. Well, I've read the bits again and it's definitely my mistake, but you did want my reaction; it just happens to be more extreme than the others' were.

[snow_yuki]

What makes you say you'd think this person would act as though nothing happened?

I was thinking of him this way: Gloomy, a bit cold, unsociable. :unsure:
Just a thought. Well, I might be mistaken for thinking of him that way, am I?

[Rage]

I was thinking of him this way: Gloomy, a bit cold, unsociable. :unsure:
Just a thought. Well, I might be mistaken for thinking of him that way, am I?

Lol there wasn't any right or wrong way of answering. I wanted peoples opinions which I could use to create an attractive character, yet keeping a sense of difference. I don't want him to act methodically like everyone else, in the sense that he's predictable.
It's kinda difficult to achieve. :sarcasm:

[emily]

Alright, got a subjective question for all those who are arsed answering it. It's subjective in the sense that every girl is an individual, and will react differently accordingly.

Here's the scenario:

You're about 19 years old, you have a part time job. The job can be anything you imagine it to be, you've just started this job, been there for about four weeks. It's everything that a job should be, except there's a weird boy who acts either annoyed, angry or even disgusted whenever you look at him. For arguements sake, you're attracted to him, visualize someone who you'd find extremely attractive.
He doesn't speak much, doesn't smile much, acts rather weird.

Okay, he's never spoken to you, never smiled and doesn't keep eye contact whenever you've met eyes during work. One day you finish your shift, and are making your way home, you exit your work and begin to walk home. Let's say you turn a corner from the place where you work at, and walk down some kind of alley way or typical suburban shortcut, and you hear a skidding footstep behind you. You turn around and see the weird boy from your work, and he then calls your name.

In your own little world, what would happen next?

Just doing some research to see how actual real people would imagine things in stead of every character just being me. :sarcasm:



i'd say
'drew?,
oh hey!'
and he'd say
'hey'
me: 'you okay?'
him: 'uumm....no, i mean yeah'
me: 'o....kay, what happened?'
him: uum nothing you just forgot your notebook'
me(thinking): i was expecting more huh!
me: 'oh okay thank you'

well this is not what i actually thought, i was thinking to write a lot but i don't have much time.So this is it hehe.... =)

[Rage]

well this is not what i actually thought, i was thinking

Haha, that made me laugh. :sarcasm:

Although having a specific object of hers, that he could use as an alibi to why he's confronted her like this is a pretty good idea. Maybe something rather personal of hers would make it interesting, like a diary. Ha, that's so cliche, fuucckkkk everything is cliche.

[Kiba]

Haha, that made me laugh. :sarcasm:

Although having a specific object of hers, that he could use as an alibi to why he's confronted her like this is a pretty good idea. Maybe something rather personal of hers would make it interesting, like a diary. Ha, that's so cliche, fuucckkkk everything is cliche.

I'm going to have to say a big, resounding NO on the diary thing.

On the other hand, everything's been cliche since writing was invented. You have nothing to worry about, as long as you try to put your own spin on things.

[snow_yuki]

Lol there wasn't any right or wrong way of answering. I wanted peoples opinions which I could use to create an attractive character, yet keeping a sense of difference. I don't want him to act methodically like everyone else, in the sense that he's predictable.
It's kinda difficult to achieve. :sarcasm:
Oh, alright. I get what you mean. ;) I just thought of him that way because there was a particular person on my mind as I was typing. Lol.