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[Apocalypse]

Hey, I'm from TW. I'm 18 and my favorite color is blue.

I write prose and sometimes poetry but I don't take my poetry seriously.

I don't have any favorite authors and I haven't read many stories. I'm a rejected writer in every forum and nobody likes me.

Hello, First Impression! :rolleyes:

Uhh, just one last thing... I joined to get more opinions on my writing... I think it's good, but people keep telling me it's horrible and that it's weak and it needs a lot. They are just jealous, right? :P

I love destroying things, by the way.

[lahari.g]

Hi Apocalypse!! :)

:welcome: to :ywo: !!! And you are just at the perfect place, if you want to get better in wrirng!!

Another thing, I don't think people are always jealous!! They try to point out your flaws to you, so that you could improve yourself. Try to look it this way, then every "harsh" critique will help you sharpen your edges!!

So, next time you get a harsh crit take it from positive point of view!!

Well. my words may seem to be lectures, but that's the ONLY way it helps you!!;)

Hope you'll enjoy your stay here!! :)

Take care :)

[hanzy911]

Hi, :welcome: to YWO I hope you enjoy your time here, have you got anything to post, or are you available to crit? V/PM me if the answer is yes :D
Also, I love the colour blue ;) So good on you!
~Hanzy

[Apocalypse]

Thanks!

And I was kidding, Lahari. I always learn from every crit I get. Of course, one thing is to learn, another is to put what you learnt in your writing.

By the way, it's writing, not wrirng. =p

[Rose]

Hiya, Apocalypse, welcome, I don't need to ask you to check out the critique Guidelines or the FAQ & Rules, since you are from TW, so I suppose that you already know them.

Hey, thought of something, since you like the blue color, why don't you check out if it is really your color... you could take the test here (http://www.wizards.com/magic/playmagic/whatcolorareyou.asp), I got blue as my color by the way. ;)

Hope you enjoy your stay here Apoly <nickname for you. XD

We are all so friendly here, and you could always ask any of us for extra info,a critique, or anything else.

P.S: I chat, practically anytime, I'm always available. :P

[Majyk]

I doubt very much that "wriring" was on purpose. :p

So, TW, huh? I used to be very active there, about two years ago, and now I log on and post only occasionally. Anyway, welcome to YWO!

[Apocalypse]

Thank you all ! :)

Well, Rosy, I think my favourite color is my color. :D

Blue
You value knowledge, logic, and deceit. You love to pursue wisdom but also to manipulate and deceive. At your best, you are brilliant and progressive. At your worst, you are treacherous and cold. Your symbol is a water droplet. Your enemies are green and red.

I'm starting to believe that technology can get to know me better than any human being. Lol.

[thecollector]

Alright, Ap. I found the thread. xD
Don't worry about YWO. You already seem to be getting along with people, alright? Just take what they pointed out in the critique- like the major work they said you needed- and use it to modify your writing for the best, okay? Just because it needs work DOES NOT mean it doesn't have potential and isn't worth the time. I hope that helps you to relax and understand. :)

I'm Will, by the way. Welcome to the site.

[Abominable Toaster]

Hi Apocalypse, and welcome to :ywo:! I hope you enjoy it here. ^^
So how are you liking the site so far? :D
If you need a critique on that short story you posted, I'd be glad to help. :) I just need the motivation of somebody asking me to assure that I will actually get around to the crit. :doh: ^^ :P
Again, welcome to the site!

[Apocalypse]

Thanks :) And do as you please. Check it out! If it makes you wanna read it then do so! If not, just VM me and tell me "It's so boring... I just COULDN'T" :P

Loves!

The!

Site!

^^

[angel of paradise]

Welcome to YWO! :) I hope you will like this site. By the way, everybody is not jealous. If everybody is saying that your writings need to be improved, there must be a reason. Take others critiques positively. :)

[Rouge]

I got green. Blues and Blacks are my enemies. Just sayin'.

Lol. welcome.

[Apocalypse]

Welcome to YWO! :) I hope you will like this site. By the way, everybody is not jealous. If everybody is saying that your writings need to be improved, there must be a reason. Take others critiques positively. :)

[I don't know how many times I edited this] ... It was a joke.

I got green. Blues and Blacks are my enemies. Just sayin'.

Lol. welcome.

We can kill each other, if you want. :P

[Rose]

Thank you all ! :)

Well, Rosy, I think my favourite color is my color. :D

Blue
You value knowledge, logic, and deceit. You love to pursue wisdom but also to manipulate and deceive. At your best, you are brilliant and progressive. At your worst, you are treacherous and cold. Your symbol is a water droplet. Your enemies are green and red.

I'm starting to believe that technology can get to know me better than any human being. Lol.

I got Blue too. Seriously though, I have no idea how I managed to get it. xD

Then I did it the second time, and allowed my sarcastic side to answer the questions, so I got green.

Therefore, I am my enemy. XD {Ironic isn't it?} :P