Cuttin' out the bullshit. streight to the point.

[NewWorldWriter]

I wanna write:p

This is the first chapter of a book I wanted to write. I have four more chapters however I want some comments and criticism on each one as I continue so that my final copy may actually be able to be published. If by the time I have more on the site maybe no one will think its salable or marketable in which case I'll revise it.
Please write lots, and thank you for your time.

[Majyk]

Please do not post your work in the newbie zone. It is not the proper place. If you would like to post your work, you first must critique others' writing by going to the Writing section (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/writing.php). We have a points system on YWO, and you gain points by critiquing others' work. You must use the points when posting your own work.

Please check out the Critique Guidelines (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php) and the Rules (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php). Also, welcome to YWO. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or one of the other moderators.

[angel of paradise]

Welcome to YWO! I hope you will enjoy this website :) .

[Optional Toaster]

Welcome to YWO, and it's spelled "straight" and not "streight." Sorry, I'm a spelling and grammar Nazi. >.< I hope you enjoy your stay here.

[Rose]

Hello and welcome, I just wan to say that Majyk already summed up the most important things such as the rules and so...
All I have to say is: Who is(are) you favorite author(s)?
What do you like to read/write usually?
Have fun and don't be a trouble maker. :)

[thecollector]

Alright, I'm getting the vibe that you're the straight to the point kind of person- obviously from the title of the thread. As for the spelling, they're quite right. Frankly, whether or not you actually choose to assosciate with people on this site is up to you, but sometimes socialization helps to get ideas for your works and all. But, that's just a thought.

The name's Will. PM/VM me if you need anything, though I don't think the moderators will take kindly to you publicly using that language, as some people on this site get offended. Not me, though.

Bye.

[limaojima8]

Hey. Welcome to ywo. I am a also a newbie and i am straight to the point.