Critique The Person Above You - Poetry Edition!

[Simmi]

So there's already a thread for this, but it's mostly prose, and pretty much empty. Here, it's for poets. And all us poets want our stuff critiqued, but no one seems to be critiquing.

How it works:


Okay, this is a thread where each person does a critique linked within the previous post, and then posts a link to their own thing they want critiqued. The idea is that every time you critique something in this thread, you are guaranteed to get a critique in return.


Ready...
Steady...
Go!