Hellos!!!

[Lydia Flo]

Hey guys :) well, its obvious I'm kinda new, or really new. Annnyway yes, I love adventure or fantacy books, but that's just me :P i loves to write, i just have a problem with finishing it, i get very intimidated (I guess that's the word to use) by writters block and then i move on to a new idea. I'll have to work on that lol. Oh, and just to warn everyone I am a VERY horrible speller :D but yes, you can call me what evers you wants um... I forgot what else I was going to put so I'll see you around :D

[Bowie20049]

Hey guys :) well, its obvious I'm kinda new, or really new. Annnyway yes, I love adventure or fantacy books, but that's just me :P i loves to write, i just have a problem with finishing it, i get very intimidated (I guess that's the word to use) by writters block and then i move on to a new idea. I'll have to work on that lol. Oh, and just to warn everyone I am a VERY horrible speller :D but yes, you can call me what evers you wants um... I forgot what else I was going to put so I'll see you around :D

Since you're from the US (An English dominated place), hopefully, you're one of those immigrants who can't speak English well because you have unnecessary 's's.

Also, try using this great invention I call, Spell Check. It underlines all your spelling mistakes, which could be fixed with a simple right-click.

[Lydia Flo]

Since you're from the US (An English dominated place), hopefully, you're one of those immigrants who can't speak English well because you have unnecessary 's's.

Also, try using this great invention I call, Spell Check. It underlines all your spelling mistakes, which could be fixed with a simple right-click.

oh, whoops, I type like that, the extra 's's, when I'm not writing things like storys by force of habit. Sorry about that I'll work on it. I'll try to download the darned spell check, it doesn't work very often though, anyway thanks :)

[Simmi]

Hm, welcome to YWO. You seem like a decent newb. Instead of downloading a spell check, you could just download the amazing Mozilla Firefox.

Hi, hello, I'm Simmi.

[jcsk88]

oh, [Capitalise.] whoops, I type like that, the extra 's's, when I'm not writing things like storys ["stories"] by force of habit [That's one nasty habit I suggest getting fid of it ASAP. It's doing you no favours.]. Sorry about that I'll work on it. I'll try to download the darned spell check, [Period.] it doesn't work very often [Comma.] though[Period here.], anyway [Comma here.] thanks [Period or exclamation mark.] :)

It can't be a good thing if I had to edit your welcome message. Please, this is writing site, where we all try to express ourselves in proper English. And really get rid of that habit with the "s"s. I'm kind of weary of seeing newbs who can't spell, can't punctuate and can't crit. I suggest heading straight to the rules and guidelines section. You can find it from the drop-down menu under "Forum" at the top left-hand corner of this page.

And just for formality, welcome to YWO.

[Majyk]

I love it when people critique newbies' intros.

Rules. (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php) <-- There, now there's no reason why you shouldn't read the rules.

Welcome to the site. I hope you do stick around--your writing will grow so much if you take everyone's criticism.

[miss_smiley]

What they said.
Looks like I don't have to jump in on the grammar-fest, although you should be warned, newbie, I am most certainly a member to that party.
Welcome. You seem a little...hyper. Too much sugar or are you usually like that? ^^

[thecollector]

Hello, I'm Will. Welcome to Earth. Yes, that's right. Everyone else will say YWO, but I say Earth. Haha. :P

Anyway, I hope you realize by now that I joke a lot with people. Also, please critique harshly. Saying it's "good" doesn't help the writer like at all. No offense, there.

[Lydia Flo]

Thanks guys. I'll remeber that. :)

Yeah, I'm normally a hyper person. I love jokes, or anything in that area. :D


I'm normally a good critiquer, or at least my friend said so.
I hope to post one of my pieces soon, just thought I'd throw that out there :)