Hi

[BEthanney:)]

Hi, I'm Bethanney, I am 13. I love to write and I love music. I write about alot of things, but mostly fiction and fantasy.

[Jack]

Hi Beth (Can I call you Beth?)

Welcome to YWO. Few questions for you:

Favourite books/authors?
Favourite music?
Writing anything at the moment? If so, what?

Also, before you start posting and what not, you should probably read the rules here (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php), and the critique guidelines here. (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php)

[An Angry Panda]

Hi, I'm Bethanney, I am 13. I love to write and I love music. I write about alot of things, but mostly fiction and fantasy.


Well, your grammar and spelling is impeccable, but show some personality, girl!

I'm An Angry Panda. Welcome to YWO. :)

[Jaywing]

Welcome!

And yes, tell us more about yourself, what books you read, your favorite animal, anything, really! :D

[Iridescence]

Bwahaha. You all sound like stalkers. *shakes head self-righteously*

Now, then. *turns on interrogation light*

Whoareyouwhereareyoufromhowdidyougetherewhat'syourfavoritecolordoyoulikesportshowlonghaveyoubeenwrit ingdoyoufindmeannoying?

*takes breath* Just kidding. I don't really want to know all that. w00t, fellow fantasy author! Awesomeness! Welcome to the site. :D PM me for crits.

[An Angry Panda]

Whoareyouwhereareyoufromhowdidyougetherewhat'syourfavoritecolordoyoulikesportshowlonghaveyoubeenwrit ingdoyoufindmeannoying?




This actually made me more out of breath than I already am. So I almost passed out.

[Iridescence]

This actually made me more out of breath than I already am. So I almost passed out.

O.O Right. Sit down. Take a breather. Eat some bamboo.

[An Angry Panda]

*crunches on bamboo* Ahh, yeah. That's the stuff.

[Emberwood]

You guys are very entertaining!

But, anyways, Welcome to beckoning halls of YWO. I am Emberwood. If you need any help or need a critique done, please don't hesitate to ask!

[thecollector]

Well, your grammar and spelling is impeccable, but show some personality, girl!

I'm An Angry Panda. Welcome to YWO. :)

Also, I agree with Ting Ting. The people demand personality! xD (I joke a lot.)

Iri stole my interrogation light so I'll have to use the old feet in water and stripped wires trick. :D

Now who do you work for! Haha.

I'm just kidding. I have the username thecollector, but you can call me Will. Everybody does. I don't care what people call me so you could even call me Big Bird and I won't care. It's a pleasure to meet you. I hope you enjoy yourself on this site because without fun, there is no free world. Also, kudos to the grammar. That saves time in critiques. Other than that, it's nice to meet you.

Ps. Stay away from Iri when she's had a bit too much. She's drunk tonight. (I'm JOKING Iri!)

[Iridescence]

Also, I agree with Ting Ting. The people demand personality! xD (I joke a lot.)

Iri stole my interrogation light so I'll have to use the old feet in water and stripped wires trick. :D

Now who do you work for! Haha.

I'm just kidding. I have the username thecollector, but you can call me Will. Everybody does. I don't care what people call me so you could even call me Big Bird and I won't care. It's a pleasure to meet you. I hope you enjoy yourself on this site because without fun, there is no free world. Also, kudos to the grammar. That saves time in critiques. Other than that, it's nice to meet you.

Ps. Stay away from Iri when she's had a bit too much. She's drunk tonight. (I'm JOKING Iri!)

Oh, is that so, William? *smacks baseball bat into left hand* Would you like to elaborate on that, hmm? *grin*

/spammage....

[miss_smiley]

*laughing at Will and Iri*
I've decided to join this little party.
Welcome! ^_^ We're a pretty friendly bunch when we're not interrogating or eating newbs. ^^

Much grinnage!
Miss Smiley ^_*

[thecollector]

Oh, is that so, William? *smacks baseball bat into left hand* Would you like to elaborate on that, hmm? *grin*

/spammage....

Do you not remember the time when you bit me while you were drunk? 0.o

*laughing at Will and Iri*
I've decided to join this little party.
Welcome! ^_^ We're a pretty friendly bunch when we're not interrogating or eating newbs. ^^

Much grinnage!
Miss Smiley ^_*

Sure, you neglect to mention the mines where the bad newbies mine gold for us... or the dungeons where we... "ask the newbs about themselves" using ancient our torture equipment. Haha. (Okay, you must be freaked out, but it's just a joke.)

[miss_smiley]

No, those are only for the newbs who don't behave themselves.
And believe me. They get a whole different kind of reception committee. *sharp smile that doesn't reach her eyes*

[Jaywing]

This newb seems nice enough. She just needs to give more personality! *bows*

[Majyk]

Watch the spam, guys...

[BEthanney:)]

I have several books that I enjoy, however, I do not pick favorites because I read so much, a few of these books are; The Dragon Riders of Pern series by Anne McCaffery, The Harper Hall Trilogy also by Anne McCaffery, and The Icemark Chronicles by Stuart Hill. As for music, I am a big fan of The Beatles, Styx, U2, Green Day, Linkin Park, Switchfoot, and All Time Low. I recently started writing a book, I do not have a name for it yet (I plan to name it after it is written), but I do have a basic storyline already set up (it is a Si-Fi/Fantasy dealing with the real world and a different dimension).

[Jack]

I have several books that I enjoy, however, I do not pick favorites because I read so much, a few of these books are; The Dragon Riders of Pern series by Anne McCaffery, The Harper Hall Trilogy also by Anne McCaffery, and The Icemark Chronicles by Stuart Hill. As for music, I am a big fan of The Beatles, Styx, U2, Green Day, Linkin Park, Switchfoot, and All Time Low. I recently started writing a book, I do not have a name for it yet (I plan to name it after it is written), but I do have a basic storyline already set up (it is a Si-Fi/Fantasy dealing with the real world and a different dimension).


Nice to know a bit more about you. Green Day are the best frickin' band to grace this side of the solar system, so nice to see a fellow fan. I HATE All Time Low, however. I look forward to critting some of your work, if you post anything up, give me a shout.