Future sight and alternate dimensions!

[jcsk88]

This is something I like to do in my critiques, and I've had a couple of exchanges in the chatroom that play out in a similar manner.

Here are the rules:

---> Read any novel or short story from the portfolio of the person above you.

---> Guess what happens to one character in the next chapter of the novel (future sight).

---> In the case of a short story, suggest another ending or extension (alternate dimension).

Simple enough? I suppose this could spark some critiquing as well as plot developments, both of which I feel are rather valuable to aspiring authors like us.

Read the runes (or a palm) and see what you can come up with!

[sXe_Jinxeh]

I read: The Day the Last Straw Burned in the Land of the Black Furnace!

I have an alternate dimension/extension!

The Dead Supreme is aware of his error with the little boy, and as such becomes even more brutal than before when he does make a true mistake of an innocent person thrown into the gates while the guilty walk free.

PS...crit is in progress. ;)