MOOOOO. x]

[lalalaSEHERx3]

Hai (:
I'm SEHER n_n & i'm new heree.:]
Whats crackalackinnn;D?
haha, err, im bad at first impressions ?

[Simmi]

Er... I don't know what to say. I felt brain cells die. Don't use chat speak, this is a writing site. Use proper grammar and punctuation.
What do you like to read?
What do you like to write?
We're kind of Twilight haters.
Favorite genre?
How long have you been writing?
Welcome to YWO.

[Mercy]

Welcome to YWO.
Don't forget to read the Rules (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php) and Critique Guidelines (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php).
What have you read besides Twilight?

[jordanisonfire]

I get the feeling this is another TW troll. If so, GTFO now, you're all sad freaks.

[lalalaSEHERx3]

Er... I don't know what to say. I felt brain cells die. Don't use chat speak, this is a writing site. Use proper grammar and punctuation.
What do you like to read?
What do you like to write?
We're kind of Twilight haters.
Favorite genre?
How long have you been writing?
Welcome to YWO.

I wasn't using chat speak.. haha..
I didn't know we had to be proper at all times around here, my mistake?
I love reading vampire books, pretty much anything to do with fantasy.
You're twilight haters?! WOW. :o
& I just started writing a year ago (:

[lalalaSEHERx3]

I get the feeling this is another TW troll. If so, GTFO now, you're all sad freaks.

Rude.

[Bowie20049]

By the way. You need to have proper dialog tags on your story.

[jordanisonfire]

Just a tad, yeah. But do I care?

[Nyx]

No need to make quick judgments Dan ;]
Anyways, welcome to YWO.
(p.s. team jacob ftw :] )

[Jack]

Hey whatever your name is.

Yeah, this site kinda hates twilight. I don't mind it myself, but if I were you I would keep the Twilight chatter, sigs and avatars to a minimum :)

Well, welcome to YWO, and give me a PM if you need a crit.

Also, excuse Shad, we have had problems with Trolls coming her recently, and alot of them match your description

[lalalaSEHERx3]

Just a tad, yeah. But do I care?

That's good, because I don't care either. (: I have better things to do then waste my time with rude people like you-- I don't even know WHY you clicked this thread link, I don't feel welcome at all.



No need to make quick judgments Dan ;]
Anyways, welcome to YWO.
(p.s. team jacob ftw :] )
Thank you(:

[Mercy]

You still haven't answered my question...

[jordanisonfire]

I make the judgments 'round here. Cuz I rule thousands of universes...

[lalalaSEHERx3]

Hey whatever your name is.

Yeah, this site kinda hates twilight. I don't mind it myself, but if I were you I would keep the Twilight chatter, sigs and avatars to a minimum :)

Well, welcome to YWO, and give me a PM if you need a crit.

Also, excuse Shad, we have had problems with Trolls coming her recently, and alot of them match your description

Err, really? Sorry, I kind of thought this site would LOVE Twilight, because many other writing sites have. I'm a huge fan of twilight, but I don't gush about it like a 'troll.' But, I will keep it to a minimum :]

[lalalaSEHERx3]

You still haven't answered my question...

Oh, sorry.
Twilight, Harry Potter, The Princess Diaries, Blue Bloods, V.C Andrews & a lot of books by 'Lauren Mrycle,' or 'Meg Cabot.'

[Mercy]

Oh, sorry.
Twilight, Harry Potter, The Princess Diaries, Blue Bloods, V.C Andrews & a lot of books by 'Lauren Mrycle,' or 'Meg Cabot.'
...have you read any classics, or something other than petty romance novels?

[MasterCarlton]

I hope to God you came here to improve your writing, because after reading your "book."

CHRIST YOU NEED IT!

Welcome though :)

[Bowie20049]

I hope to God you came here to improve your writing, because after reading your "book."

CHRIST YOU NEED IT!

Welcome though :)

I already beat you to that.

[Mercy]

Err, really? Sorry, I kind of thought this site would LOVE Twilight, because many other writing sites have. I'm a huge fan of twilight, but I don't gush about it like a 'troll.' But, I will keep it to a minimum :]
Twilight isn't liked here primarily because it lacks substance and won't help you in your writing. At all.

[Nyx]

...have you read any classics, or something other than petty romance novels?

Harry potter is NOT a petty romance. :P

[lalalaSEHERx3]

WOW. You guys are really mean. I came on to this site to be able to chat, and actually have fun while reading people's stories at the same time. All you guys do here is bash people that are different then you, YES I LOVE TWILIGHT OGMGOGMGOGMG<3 and YES I LOVE PRETTY ROMANCE NOVELS, and nope, sorry, my story isn't as good and mature enough as any of yours because I wrote that when I was in 6th grade, but thanks for the warm welcome. Wow, you all know how to chase members away. Thanks for the few kind members that made me feel welcome here, but other than that, goodbye? I'd love it if this thread was locked/deleted. Thank you.

[jordanisonfire]

Lock it, then frame it.

Put a sign underneath it, saying, "Newbs, don't be like this".

[Mercy]

WOW. You guys are really mean. I came on to this site to be able to chat, and actually have fun while reading and writing people's stories at the same time. All you guys do here is bash people that are different then you, YES I LOVE TWILIGHT OGMGOGMGOGMG<3 and YES I LOVE PRETTY ROMANCE NOVELS, and nope, sorry, my story isn't as good and mature enough as any of yours because I wrote that when I was in 6th grade, but thanks for the warm welcome. Wow, you all know how to chase members away. Thanks for the few kind members that made me feel welcome here, but other than that, goodbye? I'd love it if this thread was locked/deleted. Thank you.

Petty, not pretty, first off. I'm simply asking so I could know what to suggest. I'm working with someone who also likes Twilight right now, so it wasn't an insult. Leaving won't do much good - if you stay, you can improve.

Harry potter is NOT a petty romance. :P
This is true. But the rest are. :P

[Jack]

WOW. You guys are really mean. I came on to this site to be able to chat, and actually have fun while reading people's stories at the same time. All you guys do here is bash people that are different then you, YES I LOVE TWILIGHT OGMGOGMGOGMG<3 and YES I LOVE PRETTY ROMANCE NOVELS, and nope, sorry, my story isn't as good and mature enough as any of yours because I wrote that when I was in 6th grade, but thanks for the warm welcome. Wow, you all know how to chase members away. Thanks for the few kind members that made me feel welcome here, but other than that, goodbye? I'd love it if this thread was locked/deleted. Thank you.

Does that mean your leaving then?

[lalalaSEHERx3]

Lock it, then frame it.

Put a sign underneath it, saying, "Newbs, don't be like this".

Haha, now, I think you should lock it, then frame it.
Put a sign underneath it, saying, "How to chase away members."

[Bowie20049]

Harry Potter turned into a petty romance...

[Mercy]

Harry Potter turned into a petty romance...
But it wasn't as bad and it didn't focus on the romance.

[Nyx]

Harry Potter turned into a petty romance...

Still had a concept though.

[lalalaSEHERx3]

Petty, not pretty, first off. I'm simply asking so I could know what to suggest. I'm working with someone who also likes Twilight right now, so it wasn't an insult. Leaving won't do much good - if you stay, you can improve.


This is true. But the rest are. :P

I'm sorry I didn't mean to direct that at you.
And no, I'd rather improve where members don't take everything so seriously.. & yes this means I'm leaving hahaa. Bye(: Someone please lock this because I know I can't keep myself from talking back to people when they're rude.. =/

[jordanisonfire]

Haha, now, I think you should lock it, then frame it.
Put a sign underneath it, saying, "How to chase away members."

"How to chase away members we never wanted", dear. :3