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miss_smiley
09-20-2010, 02:42 PM
Guess who...?

That's right, ladies and gents. Miss Smiley is back in town, at least for a short time. :D Hopefully, this time it'll be more than a week!

<3

lostbookworm
09-20-2010, 03:23 PM
Welcome Smiley!!! How are you?

Majyk
09-20-2010, 03:28 PM
Guess who...?

That's right, ladies and gents. Miss Smiley is back in town, at least for a short time. :D Hopefully, this time it'll be more than a week!

<3

Hey! Welcome back! ^^

miss_smiley
09-20-2010, 03:43 PM
:D Thanks, Majyk and Booksies. I'm quite grand, and very happy to be back. :D And, of course, still smiling. :)

Iridescence
09-22-2010, 10:36 PM
Ahh, Meggles is back! HOOOOORAY! :D It sucks horrendously that I have to go. School is soundly kicking me in the ass and enjoys watching me squeal, so if I ever do come on YWO within the next weeks or months or whenever, it will only be a cursory glance brought on by nostalgia. Hugs and kisses to you all.
Iri signing out.

Alice Glitterhorn
09-22-2010, 10:58 PM
D:
Mifficus. *salutes* Do what you must.

But god dammit, I'm going to fuckin miss you. :(

Majyk
09-23-2010, 03:01 AM
Aww, bye, Iri! :( Remember to drop by when you're on break or something.

lostbookworm
10-02-2010, 10:12 AM
Goodbye YWO. Or at least for the next week. I'm going on holiday to the UK! For a couple of days. The rest is spent getting Jet Lag, and then recovering from Jet Lag. And when I come back, school is hitting me hard, so I'll only come on every once in a while. Bye-bye for a short while.

Jack
10-02-2010, 10:21 AM
Bye Kyle. See you in a week.

Where in the UK are you going?

lostbookworm
10-02-2010, 02:13 PM
Down south by the sea, that's all I'm telling the stalkers on this forum.

Rouge
10-02-2010, 04:55 PM
I'm back, if you haven't noticed.

Majyk
10-02-2010, 09:51 PM
I hadn't noticed. I mean, it's not like you've been doing lots of critiques or anything. /sarcasm
Haha, I remember when it was basically just me and you critiquing everything. :p


Welcome back. I still can't get your old username out of my head.

Faust
10-06-2010, 06:36 PM
Lostbookworm is back tomorrow!

Simmi
10-09-2010, 03:08 AM
Hi, hello, everyone. Guess what! I'm (kind of) back! I'll try and be here a bit more often, seeing as I'm in creative writing now, and I could really use some of your help. (I also have a major short story assignment due at the end of the semester, and I think some of you guys now I like to attempt to be good at writing. )

So, I guess I'll kinda be seein' you guys around.

Majyk
10-09-2010, 02:32 PM
Welcome (kind of) back!

miss_smiley
11-22-2010, 12:45 PM
I'm unreliable, I'm terrible, I'm... all kinds of things.

But! I am also back, at least in part, for the holidays. :D

Now, I'm going to go check up on the sagas I'm meant to be a critique-er of (that means you, Bowie, unless you have qualms, or don't need me - which would be fair enough, because I've kind of sort of let you down by not being here for ages), but if anyone else has things that they would like me to critique, in particular, please, by all means, leave a message on my wall.

Anyways! I'm back! Run! Hide! Lock up your... novels and scripts? :P

Eilidh
11-22-2010, 01:59 PM
Welcome back!

Majyk
11-22-2010, 02:47 PM
Welcome back, Smiley!

Rouge
12-05-2010, 02:51 AM
Well, YWO, it's been real.

Clarissa
01-18-2011, 10:53 AM
Yeah. It didn't work out. I may come back again, ya know, just for the memories. Byebye.

Alice Glitterhorn
01-18-2011, 03:54 PM
yeah. It didn't work out. I may come back again, ya know, just for the memories. Byebye.

</3 :(

Lykaios
01-18-2011, 06:08 PM
Nooooooooo!! :'(

Shaun
01-18-2011, 07:26 PM
Does anybody know why?

Jack
01-18-2011, 07:29 PM
I can find out.

Syn
01-25-2011, 01:02 PM
Gosh darn, I've been away for so long! (Not that I was here for long before that... aaanywhoo)
Been busy, been lazy -- more lazy than busy, but I've also been quite busy so I wasn't all lazy.
Now I'm back and I don't know where's what anymore!!
Has anything changed?
Tell me, tell me quick!

Lykaios
01-25-2011, 01:24 PM
Hai, welcome back! :D

Has anything changed?

We have purple sheriffs and a cat called Bartimaeus.

Clarissa
01-25-2011, 04:40 PM
Well hello. I'm done being melodramatic. I'm still insanely stressed, but that's not going to change. And I've realised that I have no friends in the real world, so am returning, tail between legs.

*half-waves*

Rose
01-25-2011, 04:55 PM
We thought you were leaving . . . fo' eva'.

WELCOME BACK.

*slaps Clar*

You picked the wrong time to "leave", young lady. *facepalm*

Alice Glitterhorn
01-25-2011, 07:09 PM
Well hello. I'm done being melodramatic. I'm still insanely stressed, but that's not going to change. And I've realised that I have no friends in the real world, so am returning, tail between legs.

*half-waves*

Hai girl, join the club.

No clothes allowed in the club room, by the way ;)

Clarissa
01-25-2011, 07:29 PM
Hai girl, join the club.

No clothes allowed in the club room, by the way ;)

Hey, who am I to dispute the rules :D

Jack
02-06-2011, 04:20 PM
Might be gone for a week or so 'cause my Internet has gone kaput. It's been out since Friday but I managed to find somewhere I could connect and let y'all know. See you guys soon. Xxxxxxxx

Lykaios
03-01-2011, 08:52 PM
Leaving tomorrow, dunno how long for - might just be for a few days or a week, but probably longer.

Majyk
03-01-2011, 09:01 PM
Aww, bye! :(
Have fun! (Or... I dunno. Depends where you're going/what you're doing. :p)

Alice Glitterhorn
03-01-2011, 11:04 PM
Lllllllllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy







bring me a mars bar.

Lykaios
03-10-2011, 06:51 PM
I'm back, sort-a. In the right county, anyway. :P

Miss me?


Alice - I have a slightly squashed cupcake and half a bar of cadbury's dairy milk chocolate . . . mars bars make me feel guilty for some reason.

Alice Glitterhorn
03-18-2011, 09:00 PM
Sooo, I finally get to post here because I'm actually leaving for a short period of time.

I'll be back Tuesday. Love you all WITH FIERY PASSION.

Peppermental
03-18-2011, 10:24 PM
I'll miss you doll.

Rose
03-19-2011, 03:39 AM
I luff you, jelly beans. <3

lostbookworm
03-19-2011, 09:00 AM
Speak soon! Have fun!

Lykaios
03-19-2011, 04:17 PM
Have fun and remember the sun-cream! :)

Alice Glitterhorn
03-22-2011, 04:21 AM
Sun-cream...

sunscreen. I got burnt around my shoulders/neck. And I got splashed by a killer whale.

SHAMUUUUUUUU.

Lykaios
03-22-2011, 03:47 PM
We call it suncream here . . . because it's creamy. :3

I MISSED YOUUUUU

Clarissa
03-22-2011, 03:52 PM
YOU'RE BACK?!!!!!!!!!!!!


(hi)

(imissedyoulotsandlots.don'teverleaveagain)

Anira
03-22-2011, 08:18 PM
Welcome back!!

And, well, I kind of disappeared of the face of the internet too. Though I didn't have as much fun or need as much suncream/sunscreen. Mine was more college-escapades related.

Majyk
03-22-2011, 08:21 PM
Welcome back!!

And, well, I kind of disappeared of the face of the internet too. Though I didn't have as much fun or need as much suncream/sunscreen. Mine was more college-escapades related.

So does this mean you're back now? :D

Anira
03-22-2011, 10:03 PM
So does this mean you're back now? :D

Yes! I see smooth sailing from here on in. ((Well, minus the whole decision process thing)). :P

Majyk
04-01-2011, 01:31 PM
I'm travelling to Philly today--the college I'm attending next year is having an open house for accepted students. I'll login later today (because I'm addicted to YWO and can't stay away xD), but tomorrow I pretty much won't be around, and then I'm driving back on Sunday, so I won't see much of you guys this weekend.

This is Majyk, by the way. Stupid person hacking the site. :glare:

Pibs
04-07-2011, 08:31 PM
Hey, does anybody remember me? :3

I've rediscovered writing for fun so hopefully I'll be around more often.

Also... is there a way to change my username? I don't really feel like a Pibs anymore...

Pibs
04-07-2011, 08:31 PM
Hey, does anybody remember me? :3

I've rediscovered writing for fun so hopefully I'll be around more often.

Also... is there a way to change my username? I don't really feel like a Pibs anymore...

Lykaios
04-07-2011, 08:37 PM
I REMEMBER YOUUUUU :D

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Majyk
04-07-2011, 08:58 PM
Hey, does anybody remember me? :3

I've rediscovered writing for fun so hopefully I'll be around more often.

Also... is there a way to change my username? I don't really feel like a Pibs anymore...

Pibs!!!!!

I--obviously--remember you, hehe. xD

Welcome back!

(If you want to change your username, message Shaun. I'd offer, but mods can't do name changes.)

lostbookworm
04-11-2011, 10:34 AM
Well, I never thought I'd say this, but I'm leaving.



... NOT REALLY! Well, sort of. I'm going to be on a lot less reguraly thanks to the fact that I've decided to read and study far more than I have been. And I want to finish this novel I've had the idea for. Same with the blog. I've been very busies. I'll be on of course, but not as often as before.

I LOVE YOU ALLS!

Bowie20049
04-25-2011, 11:53 AM
Got back from a week long cruise. The car broke down in the middle of the road so I got back at 5:00 AM the next day. Woo School in 4 hours

Simmi
04-29-2011, 06:07 PM
I might finally be active again, won't make any promises though.

Jack
05-16-2011, 11:02 PM
I'm going to be inactive any where between a few weeks to a month or so. I have some personal shit I need to sort out. Existential crisis, innit? I haven't posted anything here in weeks and I don't feel that useful or needed here at the moment. If anyone needs me that I give a shit about, I'm on FB anyway. If I don't give a shit about you, I probably don't have you on FB anyway.

Peace out.

Alice Glitterhorn
05-16-2011, 11:13 PM
You had a spelling mistake in there.

LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUU.

lostbookworm
05-17-2011, 06:24 AM
GOOD BYE JACKIE BOY! I'll probe more later. :P

Clarissa
05-17-2011, 06:35 PM
WHUT? I don't talk to you for like, a few days and you leave?

Au revior, my love <3

Rose
05-18-2011, 11:49 AM
I love you, Jacksie. <333333

I'm gonna miss you a lot. :( *sniff sniff*

Isis
05-18-2011, 06:57 PM
I turn in a major paper on Friday, then go home. I don't start employment until Memorial Day. So: this weekend and the following week will be a good one for poetry, if anyone is free and wants crits/wants to work on stuff/wants to have poetry word wars.

Spacepirate
05-20-2011, 03:59 PM
I'm going to be inactive any where between a few weeks to a month or so. I have some personal shit I need to sort out. Existential crisis, innit? I haven't posted anything here in weeks and I don't feel that useful or needed here at the moment. If anyone needs me that I give a shit about, I'm on FB anyway. If I don't give a shit about you, I probably don't have you on FB anyway.

Peace out.

Can't believe you left just as I came back.

We're travelling in the wrong directions, dude.

~

Anyway, I've missed ya'll. :pirate:

Majyk
05-20-2011, 04:01 PM
Are you back for real? Like, srsly? You're back?

*hugs Spacey* You know we're not letting you leave again.

Spacepirate
05-20-2011, 04:05 PM
Are you back for real? Like, srsly? You're back?

*hugs Spacey* You know we're not letting you leave again.

Lke srs. As real as real can be.

I've got loads of free time now, so yay.

Rose
05-20-2011, 05:02 PM
Lke srs. As real as real can be.

I've got loads of free time now, so yay.

Love the avatar, you.

And welcome back, love. <3

Clarissa
05-20-2011, 05:46 PM
No. Way.

You're back?

Does this mean I can finally stop pretending to hate you for leaving?

And, typical, you come back just as I, regretably, have to announce that I'll be on a lot less, examsss and that shite.

Shaun
05-20-2011, 07:08 PM
Don't believe it. He's not back. He's fooling with us because he's mean. :P

lostbookworm
05-20-2011, 07:14 PM
I'm so hyped, because I know he's big, but I have no idea how big. It's weird, being left out of the loop....... But now we're all screwed regarding the Olympics. :D Brilliant!

Majyk
05-23-2011, 02:55 PM
Haven't been very active around here lately anyway, but this week I've actually got a reason for it. My last dance performance before college is this week, which means rehearsal and/or a show Monday through Saturday.

GeorgeMichael
06-06-2011, 12:41 AM
I don't want to pretend I haven't done this before, I've come back only to disappear again. This time I'll admit I have nothing left to distract me, I finished my semester and I successfully directed and acted in a musical that we performed on Friday and now that everything is off my plate I feel like writing again, it's like there's an empty hole in me that needs to be filled, but I feel so out of practice, so be on the look out for me, playing survival by suicide, hanging in the common room at first and by all means if you want something critiqued I will gladly do it, just give me some time to be able to crank out paragraphs worthy of everyone's eyes again.

So anything new going on? I just came back and I see olympics going on which sounds pretty awesome =)

Lykaios
06-06-2011, 12:57 AM
Hey, George! Welcome back! :D

Oh I love it when old members come back. *nostalgia*

Yes, the Olympics is awesome - if you want to join, I think you have a week-ish to find two teammates. :)

Alice Glitterhorn
06-06-2011, 12:59 AM
Yes, the Olympics is awesome - if you want to join, I think you have a week-ish to find two teammates. :)

*cough cough they start tomorrow cough*

GeorgeMichael
06-06-2011, 01:08 AM
Wait can I really still join? What are the rules!? Also I'm not sure If any two people would want me as a member, I'm a bit rusty, but I would love to participate if I could

Majyk
06-06-2011, 01:49 AM
Hey, I remember you! You were a mod--the one and only, actually--when I first joined. Welcome back! Hope you stick around for a while. ^^

And you were just in a play? I love musical theater (I'm going to school for dance). Which play?

GeorgeMichael
06-06-2011, 02:02 AM
Yeah I was and I remember you ^.^ and we did Spring Awakening =)

Majyk
06-09-2011, 09:57 PM
Because you all care oh so much about what I do, I'm posting here to let you know that I won't be around for the next few days. Going to visit family Friday through Sunday/Monday.

And when I get back, someone needs to bother me for a critique. I haven't critiqued in so long. xD

Jaywing
06-27-2011, 08:23 PM
I feel like I should say that I'm back, at least for now... So... Yeah, hi. :)

Lizzie
06-30-2011, 08:57 AM
brb off to the states.

Clarissa
06-30-2011, 12:00 PM
I'm back from Paris. Forgot to tell you I was going.

Also, I'm leaving again tomorrow for Sweden, so I won't be back til the 9th. Miss me, bitches.

Rose
06-30-2011, 12:25 PM
You should totez post pictures, you.

Gonna miss you like fairies miss their wings when they get cut off by black-eyed ghouls. <333333

lostbookworm
06-30-2011, 12:35 PM
All I can say is that I agree with Rosie.

SapphireSeaBird
06-30-2011, 02:40 PM
I'm going away on Saturday to visit family down south. I shall return sometime next week when my parents decide they feel like driving back home.

Clarissa
06-30-2011, 11:16 PM
You should totez post pictures, you.

Gonna miss you like fairies miss their wings when they get cut off by black-eyed ghouls. <333333

They is on facebook if you can be bothered to trawl through them all, which obviously you can, because it's pictures of me we're talking about.

That much?! No way :O

<3333

miss_smiley
06-30-2011, 11:32 PM
Phew. I'm back, for the moment. Pile me with work - I'm on holidays. :D

Iridescence
07-01-2011, 01:25 AM
Phew. I'm back, for the moment. Pile me with work - I'm on holidays. :D

*the clouds part and a heavenly chorus of angels is heard*

My happiness is complete. :hug:

Isis
07-01-2011, 01:15 PM
I'm going on vacation on an enormous boat tomorrow and will be back Friday or Saturday.

lalodragon
07-01-2011, 02:40 PM
Clarissa...? And Isis....?
O_o I'll miss you both.

lostbookworm
07-01-2011, 02:57 PM
Smiley! Welcome back!

Spacepirate
07-01-2011, 03:12 PM
holiday for a month. brb. :3

Rose
07-01-2011, 04:30 PM
They is on facebook if you can be bothered to trawl through them all, which obviously you can, because it's pictures of me we're talking about.

That much?! No way :O

<3333

Trawling. I iz on it.

Hell yeah. Cause we are twins. Remember?

<3333

lostbookworm
07-05-2011, 06:41 PM
I'm going to be off for an undetermined amount of time. Shouldn't be more than four days.

lalodragon
07-05-2011, 11:22 PM
I miss you I miss you I miss you. :(
I miss you already. D',:

bookworm
07-06-2011, 07:05 AM
I'm going to be off for an undetermined amount of time. Shouldn't be more than four days.

NOOOOOOOO.
I'll miss you too.

seikoXchan
07-06-2011, 05:04 PM
Just stumbled upon this website again. Major flashback. Since I'm entering AP English, I figure that I'll be on this website a lot more again. I'm thrilled to be back. Hopefully, someone here will remember me. d:

Majyk
07-07-2011, 02:23 AM
I remember you! Welcome back! How've you been?

Peppermental
07-07-2011, 08:27 AM
Gonna be gone for a lil while, pilgrimage to dixie land and Gullah town.

Rose
07-07-2011, 08:30 AM
Gonna be counting the days until you come back. :(

Love you, Caleb. <333333333333333333333

Jack
07-07-2011, 10:18 AM
Just in case you hadn't noticed, I've been gone for a week or two. Having troublems. Thought I'd make it formal.

Rose
07-07-2011, 11:12 AM
:( Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaackie boy. <3333333

I'll miss you guys so damn much. i luh yew both.

for Caleb and Jack:

http://www.med.ubc.ca/heartfelt/2005/images/heartfelt_jenn_kouwenberg.jpg

crayons932
07-07-2011, 04:32 PM
Ok, I feel really bad because I just stopped posting and then stopped coming, but I think Ill be able to come back on now that summer is here. And for my long absence, I blame Kanen, because he recommended Game Of Thrones to me, and now I cannot stop reading them (Im on A Feast For Crows right now). Thus, Ive spent more time reading than writing xD Ahh well, maybe Ill actually start critting or something *gasp*

Cheers!

Alice Glitterhorn
07-07-2011, 05:25 PM
Em, so, I'm also taking a break. I've really been neglecting my responsibilities in the house, as well as my art and writing, so I'll be gone for awhile to try and do those things. Maybe just a week or two. I need to see how it goes.

<3

Iridescence
07-07-2011, 09:35 PM
Em, so, I'm also taking a break. I've really been neglecting my responsibilities in the house, as well as my art and writing, so I'll be gone for awhile to try and do those things. Maybe just a week or two. I need to see how it goes.

<3

I'm trying very hard to hide my emotional turmoil right now. :mellow:

Lykaios
07-08-2011, 12:48 AM
Well . . . doesn't it feel rather lonely here.

I'll be gone for the weekend (PARTAAAY) then back on Sunday until Thursday, and after that I'm holidaying in various places. Probably have a little internet access for the first week, no idea after that. Postcards to those who requested them will be sent every week I'm away, providing I can afford it. :3

Miss you all lotsandlotsandlots.

Rose
07-08-2011, 05:23 AM
WHY THE FUCK IS EVERYONE LEAVING?

O.o

Know what? Go ahead. Leave. Don't ever come back. I hate you all. :(

*goes to slit her wrists in the thread's corner*

Queen Kanen
07-08-2011, 07:38 AM
NO ROSEY DON'T! I'M STILL HERE!

oh wait... I'm leaving for camp tomorrow. I won't be back for about a week. Sorry.

IT'S NOT THAT LONG I PROMISE!

Zombified
07-08-2011, 07:39 AM
WHY THE FUCK IS EVERYONE LEAVING?



I do believe this is the first time I've ever seen Rose curse.

Queen Kanen
07-08-2011, 07:46 AM
I do believe this is the first time I've ever seen Rose curse.

Hang around a bit more, Zomb. I've seen it several times.

Isis
07-08-2011, 12:19 PM
Sup Brahs. I'm back. I see many of you reproduced like rabbits while I was away.

Clarissa
07-08-2011, 10:56 PM
ALICE IS GONE?

But I'm back (til the 15th...) :( Typical timing. Growl.

Alice Glitterhorn
07-09-2011, 08:01 PM
I'm going to be inactive any where between a few weeks to a month or so. I have some personal shit I need to sort out. Existential crisis, innit? I haven't posted anything here in weeks and I don't feel that useful or needed here at the moment. If anyone needs me that I give a shit about, I'm on FB anyway. If I don't give a shit about you, I probably don't have you on FB anyway.

Peace out.

Can't believe you left just as I came back.

We're travelling in the wrong directions, dude.

~

Anyway, I've missed ya'll. :pirate:

Em, so, I'm also taking a break. I've really been neglecting my responsibilities in the house, as well as my art and writing, so I'll be gone for awhile to try and do those things. Maybe just a week or two. I need to see how it goes.

<3

ALICE IS GONE?

But I'm back (til the 15th...) :( Typical timing. Growl.


So goes the gay couples of YWO.

(lulz I just found this funny and wanted to point it out.)

/shutsup

Arty
07-14-2011, 07:59 PM
Tomorrow I jet off for a tour of Italy, then no sooner am I back in England than I leave again for a 3-week South Africa project. I'll try and get online sometime from 21st-25th July, but in all likelihood I'll be gone until 16th August ... Golly, ain't life a bitch.

Hope everyone enjoys their summer witing projects, if you're entering Foyle I wish you all the luck in the world!

Peace and love, every day I'm shuffling <3

(also I'll secretly be keeping my blackberry with me at all times so facebook me if you need)

lostbookworm
07-14-2011, 08:12 PM
Me? I'm off. For an undetermined amount of time. May be a week. May be a month. May be forever. But I need a break. Finish off the Olympics, then that's it. If y'all want to speak to me, I might be on facebook, or not. I don't know.

bookworm
07-15-2011, 06:28 AM
I'm off between 16 July and 2 August. No Internet access whatsoever.
Then I set off on the 11 of August and come back on the 29. Holidaysssssss.
See you all properly in... September?!

I know. Life is cruel.

Rose
07-15-2011, 09:40 AM
Nasiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim. D:

I'm going to miss you like hell. Sadface.

EDIT: Till September? Oh, damn. :(

bookworm
07-15-2011, 11:02 AM
EDIT: Till September? Oh, damn. :(

Well, with a week in between, but yes :(

lalodragon
07-15-2011, 04:52 PM
I'm not going to be on much. I'll jump in and out, whenever I need a critique or want to critique something. I'll chat now and then and look at the forums when I need to or can, but not every day like I've been. YWO's getting to be an obsession and that bothers me. ....of course you're all so awesome that I'll be here at least every other week. And I'll see who won the Olympics although it can't be me. ^^
I will be back for real someday. I'll come when bookie's back and we'll see. I'll be on in November for nano. :rolleyes:
I'm not really happy with this but I've been on too much, I'm in trouble (about other things), and mom's annoyed with how much time I spend here. And everyone else is leaving, which is depressing. :glare: So, me too.

Queen Kanen
07-16-2011, 02:47 AM
I'M BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

Break out the champagne, girls!

Iridescence
07-16-2011, 04:39 AM
Hey all, leaving for Florida tomorrow. I'll be back next Saturday. I might get a chance at my dad's laptop on the trip, but if not, love and kisses to all. <33333

Lizzie
07-16-2011, 08:26 PM
OHAI. I'm back from the USofA.

Applause please.

Majyk
07-21-2011, 09:07 PM
I'm leaving tomorrow to visit my cousins and shop for college/dorm items where there are more stores (where I live has nothing good). I will have internet most days, so when I do I'll be on. Will be back home on the 31st.

Syn
07-22-2011, 06:11 PM
So my computer is fixed again so I should be back yay!
*hugs all*

Rose
07-25-2011, 09:58 AM
1000th post. W00t.

EDIT: so, I usually come to this thread to welcome and/or say goodbye to people on YWO. But, this time, it's different. This time, I'll be leaving for a while because:

1. I feel useless at the moment, for I haven't been posting any of my work or critiquing much.
2. I need some more time to work on my poetry collection and my art collection. Two main projects I've been neglecting since the beginning of summer vacation.
3. fhgdfslafueskcgskeloznf.

Now, those are mainly the reasons. Hopefully, when I come back, I'll be more active, crit-wise, writing-wise, etc. For now, if you want me to critique any short pieces you have (poetry, short stories, short novel chapters) after I'm back, feel free to post in this thread (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=6911).

I won't be completely gone. Just, way less active, I think.

People whom I already started critiquing their submissions will receive their crits in the next two/three days.

Love you all, folks. <33333333333

Omar
07-25-2011, 02:45 PM
Haha, congratulations on your 1000th post :P

Yeah I sort of suggest you do do that. While I was (and still sort of is) a bit inactive from this forum I found myself thinking a bit more about my plots and started rewriting some of my scenes etc etc.

Anywho looking forward for your return and I'm pretty much on my toes for your next chapter in Past Sunset.
*waves* :)

x3naurus
07-25-2011, 02:51 PM
1000th post. W00t.

EDIT: so, I usually come to this thread to welcome and/or say goodbye to people on YWO. But, this time, it's different. This time, I'll be leaving for a while because:

1. I feel useless at the moment, for I haven't been posting any of my work or critiquing much.
2. I need some more time to work on my poetry collection and my art collection. Two main projects I've been neglecting since the beginning of summer vacation.
3. fhgdfslafueskcgskeloznf.

Now, those are mainly the reasons. Hopefully, when I come back, I'll be more active, crit-wise, writing-wise, etc. For now, if you want me to critique any short pieces you have (poetry, short stories, short novel chapters) after I'm back, feel free to post in this thread (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=6911).

I won't be completely gone. Just, way less active, I think.

People whom I already started critiquing their submissions will receive their crits in the next two/three days.

Love you all, folks. <33333333333

Summer's really really bad for writing. It's pretty ironic, but it has it's facts. Hey, when I did this, it helped me. I'm sure it'll help you.

I'll be sure to be posting in that thread of yours, too. ;)
I told you I'd be here for that post!

lalodragon
07-25-2011, 07:54 PM
1000th post. W00t.

EDIT: so, I usually come to this thread to welcome and/or say goodbye to people on YWO. But, this time, it's different. This time, I'll be leaving for a while because:

1. I feel useless at the moment, for I haven't been posting any of my work or critiquing much.
2. I need some more time to work on my poetry collection and my art collection. Two main projects I've been neglecting since the beginning of summer vacation.
3. fhgdfslafueskcgskeloznf.

Now, those are mainly the reasons. Hopefully, when I come back, I'll be more active, crit-wise, writing-wise, etc. For now, if you want me to critique any short pieces you have (poetry, short stories, short novel chapters) after I'm back, feel free to post in this thread (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=6911).

I won't be completely gone. Just, way less active, I think.

People whom I already started critiquing their submissions will receive their crits in the next two/three days.

Love you all, folks. <33333333333



<33333333 if I hadn't beat you to it I'd cry.
I'm on more than I thought I would be. :blush: But seriously, having three days off makes it so much easier for me to talk to people face to face. Weirdly.... :huh:

bookworm
08-01-2011, 04:32 PM
I'm back for a ten-day now. Not that there seems much to be back for :(

Rose
08-01-2011, 04:43 PM
Nasiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim. Told you I'll be here to talk to you tonight. ^____^

bookworm
08-01-2011, 04:51 PM
Did you? When? When? When?

lostbookworm
08-01-2011, 05:14 PM
Backbackbackback! Yay!

Ecosysticated
08-07-2011, 10:44 PM
I'm back, bitches! It's been a long month but I'm still alive. :D

lalodragon
08-07-2011, 11:31 PM
weeklongbookieparty!

[Yes, this post used to say something else. But the above is exactly what I meant.]

bookworm
08-11-2011, 01:16 PM
I'm off between 16 July and 2 August. No Internet access whatsoever.
Then I set off on the 11 of August and come back on the 29. Holidaysssssss.
See you all properly in... September?!

I know. Life is cruel.

As I said before... I'm going today. See you all in (over) two weeks!

Rose
08-11-2011, 03:27 PM
Nasim...

I only have two things to say.

Love you sososososo much, my heroin.

Annnnnd.

Going to count the days until you come back. Lyk srsly. <33333333333purplelove33333333333

Faust
08-11-2011, 07:24 PM
No! Don't go again! Stay...

Lykaios
08-11-2011, 08:53 PM
I'm homeeeeee :D

And boy is England freezing. *sadface*

But anyway, anyone who requested a postcard - they're going to be late. I only sent them three days ago . . . :3

Alice Glitterhorn
08-11-2011, 09:04 PM
LILYYYYYYYYYYY

I missed you <333

Jack
08-12-2011, 09:32 PM
I'm back forever. Hope you mished me.

Rose
08-12-2011, 09:50 PM
I'm back forever. Hope you mished me.

Jack. Jack. Jack. Jack. *heart stops beating*

My gosh. I mished you shooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! :')

http://www.motifake.com/image/demotivational-poster/0906/jack-jack-was-a-true-idiot-demotivational-poster-1246298557.jpg

looks cool cause you're name's there. <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333

Faust
08-13-2011, 10:14 AM
Jaccccccccccccccccccccck! You're back! I've missed you alot! I wondered where you went, I've only just noticed this thread.

Arty
08-16-2011, 09:10 AM
I'm back from my South Africa expedition, finally (: I missed you all a lot, and I'm excited to get back to it!

lostbookworm
08-16-2011, 09:24 AM
I'm back from my South Africa expedition, finally (: I missed you all a lot, and I'm excited to get back to it!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! Welcome back Arty! How was Africa?

Majyk
08-24-2011, 12:13 AM
I'll be semi-gone over the next few days. I leave for college tomorrow, and a week-long orientation starts on the 25th, so I don't know how much I'll be getting on over the next week. I'll drop by when I get the chance, though.

Nyx
08-24-2011, 03:18 PM
I'm back. I feel really out of place and awkward and such (I have been gone for too long):blush:. I almost made a thread in the newbie section, but my pride stopped me.

jordanisonfire
08-24-2011, 04:54 PM
Off ter Leeds Fest, bitches. Yeah, don't be too jealous, or owt.

Lykaios
08-24-2011, 05:04 PM
Nyxxxxxxxx :D

lostbookworm
08-24-2011, 07:46 PM
Off ter Leeds Fest, bitches. Yeah, don't be too jealous, or owt.

Damn freaking jealous you little git who won't video it for me.... (goes off mumbling)








HAVE FUN!

Anira
08-27-2011, 04:28 AM
I am back from busy summer travels; it feels so good to finally be back on my computer.

Julian
08-27-2011, 08:06 PM
I might not go chatting for quite a while considering that:

1) School is nearing and I have to revise some stuff.

2) My writing is utterly terrible and I feel the need to improve it.

3) So that I can focus more on my writing :P. YWO is like a freaking drug for me haha.

4) I feel really pathetic and scrawny chatting with people whose writing skills are already top-notch ^^.


I might go from time to time as this is a drug.


I will go back when I feel that my writing skills are on par with this site's writers. After all, I do want to become a writer.

Jose
08-27-2011, 09:26 PM
I might not go chatting for quite a while considering that:

1) School is nearing and I have to revise some stuff.

2) My writing is utterly terrible and I feel the need to improve it.

3) So that I can focus more on my writing :P. YWO is like a freaking drug for me haha.

4) I feel really pathetic and scrawny chatting with people whose writing skills are already top-notch ^^.


I might go from time to time as this is a drug.


I will go back when I feel that my writing skills are on par with this site's writers. After all, I do want to become a writer.

Good luck with your writing. <333

Rose
08-27-2011, 09:43 PM
Aw. Well, bye Julia. Julia, bye. Julia Julia, bye bye.

I'll still talk to you, cause I can and all that.

Have fun. =)

Iridescence
08-28-2011, 12:41 AM
2) My writing is utterly terrible and I feel the need to improve it.

4) I feel really pathetic and scrawny chatting with people whose writing skills are already top-notch ^^.



LIES. LIES LIES LIES.

I'll miss you. :(

Faust
08-28-2011, 09:35 AM
I might not go chatting for quite a while considering that:

1) School is nearing and I have to revise some stuff.

2) My writing is utterly terrible and I feel the need to improve it.

3) So that I can focus more on my writing :P. YWO is like a freaking drug for me haha.

4) I feel really pathetic and scrawny chatting with people whose writing skills are already top-notch ^^.


I might go from time to time as this is a drug.


I will go back when I feel that my writing skills are on par with this site's writers. After all, I do want to become a writer.

Julian, no! My skills aren't top notch! Your writing is awesome! Stay!

bookworm
08-30-2011, 06:20 PM
I'm back fom my summer travels, this time for an unfortunate forever- school school school.

*big sigh*

Rose
08-30-2011, 06:27 PM
NASIM! YOU ARE BACK!

*dies*

http://diegoquintana.com/images/big/miss-u-so-much2.jpg

bookworm
08-30-2011, 06:38 PM
One correction. Missed.

*brings back to life*

lostbookworm
08-31-2011, 08:05 AM
You're baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! Yayayayayay!

Faust
08-31-2011, 03:29 PM
Welcome back! Aw, chatting with us should make up for school shouldn't it?

bookworm
08-31-2011, 04:56 PM
Aw, chatting with us should make up for school shouldn't it?

That's so true.

lalodragon
08-31-2011, 08:44 PM
BOOKIE IS BACK! and I have not spoken to her yet. I am dying over here, dying.

bookworm
09-01-2011, 09:39 AM
BOOKIE IS BACK! and I have not spoken to her yet. I am dying over here, dying.

Why not die with me then, Lalo?

Jose
09-07-2011, 03:26 PM
I Might not log in so frequently, because of my senior year’s pressure. Plus I have an SAT exam coming up. So please hold your tears.

bookworm
09-07-2011, 03:41 PM
OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ

This is the worst news I've had in ages.

Jose
09-07-2011, 03:46 PM
OMN! I know. I hate all the "learning" shit. xD

Faust
09-07-2011, 03:47 PM
I Might not log in so frequently, because of my senior year’s pressure. Plus I have an SAT exam coming up. So please hold your tears.

Don't worry, I will.

Just joking, I'll miss you!

Jose
09-07-2011, 03:51 PM
Don't worry, I will.

Just joking, I'll miss you!

I'll miss you too, Faust. :llama: <-- Just found this smiley. Coolio. :P

Rose
09-07-2011, 03:57 PM
Well, you and I are on the same boat, Jay. But I'm sure I'd still log in everyday. At least to check some new posts and all that. Might not be able to chat, though.

Anyway, I'll miss you Jay. From 7:30 AM till 10:00 AM, then from 10:30 AM till 1:00 PM. And from 1:40 PM till the next day. xD Unless we message each other after school or go out together. Heh. Wait. Are we gonna be in the same bus, too? Mr. 8ayr wasil? :P

Jose
09-07-2011, 04:00 PM
Well, you and I are on the same boat, Jay. But I'm sure I'd still log in everyday. At least to check some new posts and all that. Might not be able to chat, though.

Anyway, I'll miss you Jay. From 7:30 AM till 10:00 AM, then from 10:30 AM till 1:00 PM. And from 1:40 PM till the next day. xD Unless we message each other after school or go out together. Heh. Wait. Are we gonna be in the same bus, too? Mr. 8ayr wasil? :P

Hahaha. Yep. Ugh! Fuck this.:glare:

bookworm
09-07-2011, 04:08 PM
Well, you and I are on the same boat, Jay. But I'm sure I'd still log in everyday. At least to check some new posts and all that. Might not be able to chat, though.


I don't believe you'll be able to stop yourself from chatting with me :P

lostbookworm
09-08-2011, 07:22 AM
Um, just on a smaller note, in case some of us might be able to get on after this weekend, to the awesome people on the site.... MASSIVE PARTY ALL NIGHT SATURDAY/SUNDAY, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!







EDIT: Miss you lazy boiy. xx

Jose
09-08-2011, 11:46 AM
Um, just on a smaller note, in case some of us might be able to get on after this weekend, to the awesome people on the site.... MASSIVE PARTY ALL NIGHT SATURDAY/SUNDAY, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!







EDIT: Miss you lazy boiy. xx

lol Wohoo!

Miss you too, evil-three-eyed pshyco. xD

FayGee
09-10-2011, 11:27 AM
I'm going for like two weeks, then after that for two weeks it's doubtful that I'll be able to get on. :( I won't be able to greet all the newbs. Oh, well. All for the greater good. I suppose.

Julian
09-12-2011, 03:07 PM
Pfff >.> What is this sudden leaving domino effect-kind-of-thingy?

Anyways, I'm back. ONLY to welcome the newbies in the chatroom because nobody ever does this.


Fay and Jay.... Pff.

Faust
09-12-2011, 03:16 PM
Pfff >.> What is this sudden leaving domino effect-kind-of-thingy?

Anyways, I'm back. ONLY to welcome the newbies in the chatroom because nobody ever does this.


Fay and Jay.... Pff.

Hey, I do! I make friends with all the newbies!

lalodragon
09-12-2011, 10:17 PM
Hey, I do! I make friends with all the newbies!

S'true. Give the Faust some credit, he doesn't get enough around here. :D

FayGee
09-15-2011, 10:31 AM
Fay and Jay.... Pff.

:mad: :mad: :mad: You be quiet this second. :mad: :mad: :mad:

Oh, and by the way, I actually have internet! Yay! :D

Faust
09-15-2011, 04:12 PM
S'true. Give the Faust some credit, he doesn't get enough around here. :D

Aw, thanks. <3

And Fay, glad you're back.

Jose
09-16-2011, 03:24 PM
I'm back for like two or three days. Then I'm off again *sad face*.

bookworm
09-17-2011, 08:55 AM
I'm back for like two or three days. Then I'm off again *sad face*.

Carpe Diem, Jay! Two or three days are way better than nothing.

Jose
09-17-2011, 09:12 AM
Carpe Diem, Jay! Two or three days are way better than nothing.

Yes. true. xD

Rose
09-17-2011, 09:28 AM
Hearts.

Jose
09-17-2011, 09:59 AM
Hearts back.

Faust
09-17-2011, 11:09 AM
Hearts back.

</3 Crossed heart. That should be a smiley.

Clarissa
09-21-2011, 09:31 PM
In case you lovely people hadn't noticed, I haven't been on much. I'm not officially leaving, but I'm not going to be on much. At all.

Alice Glitterhorn
09-21-2011, 09:54 PM
In case you lovely people hadn't noticed, I haven't been on much. I'm not officially leaving, but I'm not going to be on much. At all.

This is the sound of my heart shattering into an infinite amount of pieces.

Kalculator
10-09-2011, 02:13 AM
I'm back. I've been gone for a long time.

FayGee
10-09-2011, 11:51 AM
Aw, thanks. <3

And Fay, glad you're back.

Thanks. :) I am too. :D

Alice Glitterhorn
10-09-2011, 09:55 PM
I'm back. From England. I feel like I've neglected YWO a lot lately, but hi.

Nevermore
10-10-2011, 12:40 AM
We DID miss you :)

lostbookworm
10-16-2011, 05:43 PM
For those who don't know it yet, I'm away for a week visiting Bookworm. Hopefully when I come back I'll be critiquing like never before.

bookworm
10-16-2011, 06:16 PM
For those who haven't read the above post, I'm away for a week, and for once I won't be missing lostbookworm when he's away.

Lykaios
10-16-2011, 07:20 PM
N'awww <333

Rose
10-17-2011, 02:04 PM
For those who haven't read the above post, I'm away for a week, and for once I won't be missing lostbookworm when he's away.

Miss me just a bit, okay? I heart you sosososo much, but you already knew that. 3rd i - stating the obvious.

I don't know how this week will pass without talking to you. I guess I'll fake messages from you and reply to them. A healthy state of insanity, that is. Hopefully, when you come back. I'll be waiting by your profile page with a stack of vomited poems in my PM bag. <3333333333

With love,
your english rose.

lalodragon
10-17-2011, 06:34 PM
bookie, Kyle. You know what I think. :P Miss you :(

Arty
10-17-2011, 07:44 PM
I'm back on TW now, and I've always found it impossible to be in two places at once -- I'll come back when activity in the poetry section has picked up a little here <3

(hint hint work on some fantastic poetry while I'm away!!)

ahlaj77
10-21-2011, 12:31 PM
Yeah i've been super busy lately :/ too! With the holidays approaching i'm probably gonna be gone a lil more often. But I am still around!!! :D

lostbookworm
10-24-2011, 09:47 AM
Back.

bookworm
10-24-2011, 01:22 PM
Obviously, I'm back too.

Simmi
11-14-2011, 01:11 AM
Oh, hello! Haven't been here in a very long while. I would tell you guys I'm back, but that would be lying. I'm just here to say that I will be back. After Christmas. Because my computer is broken and I can't really do anything.

I am, in fact, planning writing again. So that would give me motivation to come back here for a bit. If you're wondering why I'm just leaving this little message here, wonder no more~ Kanen sent me a message on Tumblr a week or so ago, and I never got the chance to reply but I did read it. To be honest, I had practically forgotten about this place. I would love to come back though, and hopefully after Christmas that will happen.

So, I'll stop rambling now (I have a bad habit of doing that, I should work on it...). I will maybe leave a post or two considering I can access this site through my iPod. But until I have a computer, I hope to see y'all soon~

Queen Kanen
11-14-2011, 01:56 AM
Yayz! Me plan worked!

/endstalkinglikeapirate

Sims, we all miss you and can't wait to have you back.

ps I still love your tumblr.

/spam

Iridescence
11-14-2011, 02:51 AM
To be honest, I had practically forgotten about this place.

OH NO YOU DI'INT. :mad:

...

k. You are forgiven for forgetting us. Welcome back, Simmikinz.

Majyk
11-14-2011, 05:36 PM
You didn't forget about YWO. That's impossible. We're all too awesome for you to even begin forgetting about us.

Simmi
11-14-2011, 06:33 PM
You didn't forget about YWO. That's impossible. We're all too awesome for you to even begin forgetting about us.

Well, I didn't really forget about it. I just forgot how amazing this place is and how much I loved you all. I actually checked on this site every once in a while, but I never logged in.

FayGee
12-06-2011, 04:13 AM
As you'll see in my signature, I can't really be on much this month. Really it depends on the day, though. Sometimes I might be on all day because my parents decided to do something boring so I stayed behind. :rolleyes:

zero
12-11-2011, 02:39 PM
Hi I never mentioned I'd leave but I'm back, left for other hobbies and getting a few things straight. If you could all ignore my previous posts, I'd be extremely grateful.

Arty
12-15-2011, 09:11 PM
Hi everyone, after months of non-critiquing I'm officially back <3 I've been working a ton for my Oxford interview, but now that's out the way I have the whole of the christmas holidays stretching out before me with nothing but love and writing to keep me busy ... I hope to catch up with you all asap!! : )

Julian
12-28-2011, 11:04 AM
I'm back from Florida. It was rather eventful, and I spent a majority of my time reading philosophers, such as Socrates...Plato...Aristotle... Bill O'Reilly. Quite fun, especially the latter as my great grand-uncle had a crapton of his books (O'Reilly Factor, ehem).

Majyk
12-28-2011, 03:35 PM
Welcome back!

FayGee
12-30-2011, 03:34 AM
The worst spammer ever is back. :rolleyes:

The Enchanted Muggle
12-30-2011, 04:19 AM
The worst spammer ever is back. :rolleyes:

where have you been????????

Kalculator
01-16-2012, 08:06 PM
Guys, I'm back. Maybe, anyways.

FayGee
01-17-2012, 07:34 AM
Kalc! You better stay... *tries to do a menacing look but fails*

Jose
01-20-2012, 03:49 PM
Jesus loves you and he's back to save your desperate souls.

lalodragon
01-20-2012, 06:41 PM
Have you come here to play Jesus to the lepers in your head?

Special prizes for those who recognize that song.

Arty
01-21-2012, 03:35 PM
I know this is kind of self-evident since I haven't been online in a few weeks, but I'm in my writing off-season, so I'm going to be concentrating my energies on other stuff for the foreseeable future <3

Take care everyone : )

Lykaios
01-21-2012, 05:55 PM
Abi noooooooo!
Come back and we'll make you love writing again! D:

FayGee
01-29-2012, 09:28 PM
There's currently a big change in my life (not a bad one, just a big one) and I don't know how often I'll be coming on here. It definitely won't be the same as now; maybe one or two hours a day rather than twenty four. ^^
Sooo... Bye, sort of. :(

miss_smiley
02-24-2012, 07:04 AM
So, hi. I know it's been a long time and I'm a dirt-bag and a terrible forum member...

BUT I'M BACK! :D

For approximately four to five weeks, I will actually be making a conscientious effort to make sure I get on the site for a couple of hours per week, which I think is pretty suh-weet. Since I'm 3rd year now (I feel so very old...), my study load has dropped a little and I don't need to sweat it out quite so much. :D Yay!

I'm sorry to anyone I didn't say goodbye to last time I left. :( Cookies make it better? *hopeful smile*

PS. Totes can heckle Bowie for this - he got on my Facebook page and made me feel guilty. :P

lostbookworm
02-24-2012, 08:46 AM
SMILES! I'M SMILING RIGHT NOW! <33333333333333333333333333333333333

So very glad to have you back dearie, hope you enjoy everything that's happened since you've been away. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

PS. I loves you.

PSS. No way am I posting again now. 666 posts? Too cool.

bookworm
03-08-2012, 06:39 AM
Just felt like half-officially saying I'm not going to be refreshing YWO from morning till night like I used to for the next month or two. My excuse- a few journeys and a few exams (but I'm still writing, obviously).

lalodragon
03-08-2012, 12:12 PM
Just felt like half-officially saying I'm not going to be refreshing YWO from morning till night like I used to for the next month or two. My excuse- a few journeys and a few exams (but I'm still writing, obviously).

http://glowingshadow.files.wordpress.com/2009/05/hugs.png?w=300&h=300

milyunk
03-11-2012, 08:17 PM
nice :)

Lizzie
03-25-2012, 08:59 PM
hey.

Julian
03-27-2012, 11:24 PM
Leaving for a few days...weeks...months, maybe? Dunno. I have to read and write more.

Alice Glitterhorn
04-28-2012, 02:28 AM
well, it's about time i say goodbye to ywo, at least for a little while.

if you need me, find me on facebook or text if you have my number

Lykaios
04-28-2012, 02:29 AM
Whaaaatt D:

I hope you're okay, lovely. Best wishes and lots of love. <333

We'll miss you, please come back soon~

Queen Kanen
04-28-2012, 02:32 AM
:( :( :( :( :(

Deva, I love you. Come back soon, please. Please please please.

-Kanen

Carraka
04-28-2012, 02:35 AM
D:


Swish.

Iridescence
04-28-2012, 05:07 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. -sobs- I love you, darling, come back sooooooooon. <3

Lizzie
04-28-2012, 11:03 PM
I'll be going for a bit too.

lostbookworm
04-29-2012, 06:58 AM
Lizzah, nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

One that note, I shall also be on a lot less due to exams.

Emo writter
05-04-2012, 01:30 AM
So I have been here a couple days and they were pretty good, but I know realize some people don't like my work. I know I can work on my own and get my teachers and friends to give me advise. Thank you for all your help and advise, but I'm thinking of leaving for good and finding some where else to write.

Bowie20049
05-04-2012, 01:48 AM
You only posted 1 piece and you had an extraordinarily good critique on it that you could use to improve yourself. And you're leaving because you think people don't like your work?

1. Not everything you write will be liked. That's just a fact, not because you're bad or people are jealous. You cannot appeal to everyone, period.

2. That critique was really good. You can easily improve yourself through that. Many friends and teachers give little help aside from the ego-boost because they are nice, but at least here, you'd have a really good peer review.

But if you're going to leave, fine. That's your choice. I hope you can find another small community that could give you some good advice and reviews as well as here.

Emo writter
05-04-2012, 01:56 AM
It's not because of that the critique and I'm pretty sure Majk deleted it anyway.

Majyk
05-04-2012, 02:07 AM
I did not delete the critique. I closed your thread until you write a proper critique. It will be opened once you've written one yourself. Just to clear that up.

Emo writter
05-04-2012, 02:08 AM
whatever

Bowie20049
05-04-2012, 02:15 AM
The critique system runs on a give-take. You give a good critique in order to receive one. You'd want all the help you can get on your story and everyone here, whom also write, want to have a good critique on theirs.

The more you learn on how to critique and review, the better you get at in your own writing. It becomes easier to spot mistakes by yourself, but at the same time, you recognize your need for other people's reviews on your own work.

I can spot mistakes on other people's work and can tell them about it, but at the same time, I make those same mistakes on my own work xD I'm terrible.

Georgy
05-04-2012, 04:14 AM
So I have been here a couple days and they were pretty good, but I know realize some people don't like my work. I know I can work on my own and get my teachers and friends to give me advise. Thank you for all your help and advise, but I'm thinking of leaving for good and finding some where else to write.

Having read all this, I'm eager to read your story and the critique!
It's the best advertisement one ever posted!
So, you are genius!:P

Infinity_Man
05-04-2012, 04:29 AM
I apologize if my critique of your work came across as harsh. I did say at the end that my comments were meant to help you, as I was pointing out errors or areas where you could improve. I sought to educate you, and challenge you in a constructive way. If you choose to ultimately stay in a safer realm where you know everyone who reads your writing is going to be very supportive, then that is your decision. If you wish to grow as a writer, however, you will have to come to terms with the fact that nothing you write will be perfect (no one can write perfectly) and loved by everyone. The sooner you accept constructive criticism, the sooner you will allow yourself to grow as a writer.

When that time comes, also note that this is likely one of the least-hostile environments for sharing your work you can find. I've seen many other forums with older writers who absolutely TEAR works apart. They point out what's wrong, but don't necessarily point how how to fix it. I believe if you abandon this forum, you are giving up a valuable resource.

Georgy
05-04-2012, 04:44 AM
I just read your story and InfMan's critique, and I really see nothing offensive or annoying in it.
The story is interesting, the critique is well done. No point to fuss. If you gonna be a writer, keep on working on your writing.

lalodragon
05-04-2012, 03:47 PM
I didn't even read the whole crit and I was impressed by it... :mellow: Give us a chance, sweetheart. Long enough to let your intro thread die before posting an outro thread.

Lykaios
05-04-2012, 04:33 PM
So I have been here a couple days and they were pretty good, but I know realize some people don't like my work. I know I can work on my own and get my teachers and friends to give me advise. Thank you for all your help and advise, but I'm thinking of leaving for good and finding some where else to write.

Merged this thread with the I'm Leaving thread - it doesn't really need its own thread.

Lizzie
05-07-2012, 01:44 PM
I'm leaving properly now :p

See y'all not-that-often!

EDIT: Not forever. I mean I'll be on and off for the next couple of weeks due to exams and shit.

Arty
05-07-2012, 08:07 PM
I'm leaving properly now :p

See y'all not-that-often!

Forever? Why?

Infinity_Man
05-08-2012, 10:09 AM
Not really leaving. But probably a decrease in activity. I'm working for the summer again, and will be waking up at 5:30 and getting home at 5 in the afternoon, so critiquing might not be my first priority.