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Gandalf the White
08-19-2008, 11:46 PM
Mind Trick/Brain Teaser
08-20-2008, 01:34 AM
I just spent an hour scouring TW for this: http://www.teenagewriters.com/forum/showthread.php?t=14839&highlight=news+anchor
WAIT DON'T CLICK ON IT YET.
Basically, it's another story that has the same elements you have here: News anchor announcing the apocalypse. And that story obviously stuck with me, so it was very, very odd to see yours.
You don't have to read it, because it might mess up your style. The difference between that one and this one (at least how I feel ) is that that one focused on emotions, and this one focused on scientific explanations.
I dunno. If you want a critique from me for this piece (or any other) PM me and I will obey you. But I think it's best that you get point of views from people that have not read this other story.
Did you make that video or is there a story somewhere?
Gandalf the White
08-20-2008, 06:56 AM
Nope I didn't. I just wanted to show everyone. See if they think abnormally or not.
08-24-2008, 07:10 AM
Nice, I thougt it was cool. Good job. The "news anchor" did really well!
08-24-2008, 06:32 PM
08-25-2008, 08:45 AM
No offense but I don't see a story here. (Don't hit me)
I said red hammer, so did my mom. But my brother said blue pickaxe. :mellow:
08-25-2008, 10:00 PM
I thought of a blue shovel...
And this thread will be moved to Random Games since it is not a story.
08-25-2008, 10:10 PM
My first thought was:
Color and a tool? What color and tool? Why does everyone ask the color question? What's with all of these hammers? Okay, I'll pick one - A STRIPY BLUE SCREWDRIVER! ^.^
...am I abnormal? ._.
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