Hello

[lone_wolf_anime_girl]

Hello, I'm new, and I was referred to here by a person after they read some of my writing and actually heard me out that I thought I needed critiquing. :) Thank you that person, anyways. I'm Ally, everyone just calls me Ally. ^^ I love writing, and I'm pretty good at building characters info., but I perfer to do it as I go on. I'm good at description, but I don't think I describe certain things good enough, like I become lazy in describing certain subjects.

So, these are my flaws and what makes me better at it. Oh, and if I got too carried away in writing, "Hello, salutations, aloha, ko-ne-chy-wa, and hi."

-Eyes as red as blood,
Watching, waiting-

[Carraka]

Welcome! JOIN THE GAME NOW!!! (It's in my sig.) JOIN JOIN JOIN NOW NOW NOW

OW My hand hurts. I'm typing with my thumb, so sorry if I make this welcome short. You can check out my stories, and I can crit your stories, and we'll help each other with description, because that's my weakness also.

[jordanisonfire]

And that guy would be me! Hey, welcome to the site. Post your work, it was good, but I'd prefer to crit it on here. Enjoy! :)

[Carraka]

A referral from Jordan! I feel so loserly. Then again, you probably just want the virtual books. xDD

[lone_wolf_anime_girl]

Cool; okay...

Carraka: Awesome! If you have outside resources to books, you can give them to me, and I'll be happy to critique yours. I love critiquing, I find it enjoyable, crazy enough.

Shadow: Cool; nice to finally meet you here.

Question. Where do I go to post my stuff to be critiqued?

-Eyes as red as blood,
Watching, waiting-

[Carraka]

At the top, beneath the heading, next to Community, is Literature. Click on that. It should be pretty straight-forward.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=125

Join the game! Heh. Heh. -fades away-

[lone_wolf_anime_girl]

K; thankies!

-Eyes as red as blood,
Watching, waiting-

BTW; you can add me to your friends list - if we have on on here - if you like.

[Carraka]

Yeah. If you click on my name, it should have an Add Carraka to Your Buddy List option. I added you. But as far as I can tell, adding doesn't actually do anything; it just fosters a sense of community.

[jordanisonfire]

Come to think of it, I haven't added anybody...

[Carraka]

I added you. -sweet smile-

[jordanisonfire]

I added you. :P

[Nyx]

Hi. Welcome. Hope you enjoy being here! Can't wait to read some of your work. :D

[lone_wolf_anime_girl]

Nyx: Thanks, looking forward to reading some of your work.

K; thanks for adding me you guys! ^^

[Shaun]

Thanks for joining! Hope you have fun, learn some new stuff, etc. Feel free to bring some of your friends. :)

[Tncowgirl]

Howdy, I'll say more when I got more time, but welcome to the site, if you need anything just send me a pm.

[Ichigo]

AHHH!
It's finally happened; another Ally!
This is so exciting! Except I spell mine Alley, yes, like the branch of street.

WELL THIS IS PRETTY COOL!
So welcome to the site, post much!
Is your name actually Allison?

[Rafael Domination]

Anime..eh?

Now tell me, do you draw the stuff! Cuz' lemme tell you...

THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!!!

:D

Just kidding!

Welcome to the site!