The Patokafus Trilogy Book1 The Goldstone by Ashley Domenic Augustine

[Cool Andy]

Dark armies of destruction,devilish demons, air pirates, mysterious prophets, marching robots and a magical goldenstone which holds the key to a futuristic race's salvation from slavery in a battle of good against evil.

The first in a Good VS Evil Sci Fi Fantasy trilogy written by a boy of ONLY 13 YEARS OLD!!!

Set in a futuristic planet called Zorania which is populated by Humans, Machines and a race of ancient warriors of the seven elemental enviroments that control the planet The Patokafus's.

This planet has four Countries.
Zoa, Avanar, Dask and Maia.
These Countries are at peace until the greedy King of Dask Darcinder grows hungry for power and goes on a journey to all the other three Countries counquaring them all one by one. The unlikely hero of the book is a young orphan named Jaden who finds a mysterious Goldstone in the Zoan desert while hunting for a monstrous creature called the ratgle which is half rat, half eagle.
Jaden is then forced on a journey which will take him across the whole of Zorania to protect this mysterious stone from the forces of Dask.
On this journey he meets many characters, fights many battles, loses many friends and discovers more of the life of Zorania.

The book has a long range of characters, weapons, armour, languages and many guides to aspects of the book in it's glossary that will feed any hungry sci fi fantasy fan with information.
The style of writting used in the book is gripping, fast paced and keeps the reader reading all the way to the end.
The only thing letting this book down though is the grammar and spelling errors.
This young lad is in need of an editor but above all the grammar and spelling mistakes we as readers all should know that IT IS THE THEME OF THE STORY THAT REALLY COUNTS!


I give this young author a 9/10
I hope the next one will be better then this one!:D
I can't wait for it!

[Phantom]

Wow, only 13.

[Carraka]

Grammar and spelling matters a lot to me.

...

If I had good grammar when I was thirteen, he should too. xP

Kudos to him, though.

Even if I do have a problem with the theme, which must be:

Young people can write 2.

I mean -- the theme is:

Orphans can fight evil people and still get published.

[Carraka]

Yeah, AuthorHouse, apparently.

[Phantom]

Well, I don't have any grammar skills to it doesn't bother me. I really can't tell.

[mikedb1492]

The grammar is way to bad for me to read it. You can tell it was self published by a 13 year old.